never mind, i think i understand the title of your other story a bit better now. your writing is interesting to read, though i suggest some proofreading and editing, as some parts get a bit confusing, not in concept, but in wording.
Although I predicted most of the ending after the first couple paragraphs, I must say this Is a great story. I wouldn't worry, as it appears to be overwhelmingly difficult to write a mirror horror story you can't predict to some degree
All in all, good job, very creative and well written.
Well said, but considering this piece's short size, I don't think this is quite the right place to post it. Still, well done. I reccomend you make a list of things like this that you believe. Welcome to the site!
Well hello, welcome to the community cyndydalton! Good, meaningful poem, the only thing to point put is the title, where you wrote "og" instead of "of". Happy new-years!
ZAmazing and well written. Excellent metaphor on its own, but would love to read more of this. Good job! And, on another note, I have no use for gift points, so take them
Very nice. I was a little confused by the wording at times, but I wouldn't change it regardless. Well done! And happy holidays, I have little use for gift points, so here's a random late christmas gift
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