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I look to be entertained, informed, and connected in some way. It may be wrong but if the first few lines or paragraphs don't hook me in some way, I will leave without even reading the rest. Also, I will notify you if I run into errors.
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I do not mean to toot my own horn but I am awesome at limericks. I've helped so many people with limericks. I've even thought about opening up a class here on limericks.
Favorite Genres
In no particular order: humor, horror, biography. I'll read any genre but those are my main favorites!
Least Favorite Genres
I'm not sure. Maybe legal or finance but if done in the right voice, even that can be good.
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Poetry, short stories, bios, essays,fiction, and nonfiction
Least Favorite Item Types
pros, books
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Something that is LONG like 100 kbs or something. I will only review long pieces if someone requests it of me but nothing that's 100 kb. Let's not get crazy or anything.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Lexi Joy!

This was a really great story! I must say I wondered when it was going to be funny. I was not displeased! It turned out totally funny. Like a joke. If I could remember things more, I would totally tell people that! *Laugh*


I have no suggestions to give you. This was a terrific piece!

Write on!

Jenny
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Tina!

I thought that this was a great how to article! It went through all of the elements of writing stories about the supernatural beings. It was very well thought out.

On a personal note, I would have been even happier with it if it did not mention Twilight at all. To me, those are fairies, not vampires.

Write on!

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Peaches!

Wow! This was indeed an incredible thing to read!

I was born in the late 70s. I know all of these commercials though because I love tv! Well, really only thing I'm not hip to is “Biggby Coffee jingle:" Or bigby coffee at all.

This is a great thing you brought up “Be good to the last drop.” Are they talking to me? Or the coffee? Now I will wonder that every time I see the commercial.

On one last note regarding commercials: When was seven years old, my parents and their company were talking. I happened to be walking by when someone quoted a commercial "how do you spell relief?" I walked right through at that time, stopped, said "r-e-l-i-e-f" then went along my way!

Write on!

Jenny

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Fictiondiva!

I just absolutely love good parodies and this was just outstanding! So outstanding in fact that as I read it, my mind did not read it in my voice. My mind read it in Weird Al's voice with the actual music playing. You did so amazing at this, that it could be a Weird Al song!

Write on!

Jenny
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Victoria!

Well, I can totally relate to this Not for me but for my mother. She is a weirdo magnet. Like you, she often says hi to them. I try not to say anything to them or make eye . After she says hi, woop they are right there telling their life experiences and she can't seem to go away. You and her have the same problems concerning that.

As far as room for improvement: I saw absolutely none in here!

Write on!

Jenny
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hello Patrice!

This was very short, sweet, and right to the point! I loved that you said so much in just so little amount. Nothing was dragged out or anything.

Now onto a personal note: I don't know when but Saturday Night Live is no where as good as it used to be and last time I watched it was the 40th special. (not the marathon like in this piece) I was very pleased with that.

As far as room for improvement in here: I see none!

Write on!

Jenny
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Maria!

It is always rather interesting to get a background sense of people around wdc. I has a similar poll but it was a flop so I removed it. Yours is so much more done than mine was though and a slightly different angle. So bravo *Thumbsup*

Write on!

Jenny
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Nick!

This is a member to member rising star's review.

This was very clever and imaginative. I couldn't even imagine being a vampire let alone a vegetarian one! I took notice on the things it did consume were read. I wondered how the vampire was to get nutrients and nourishment but it turns out that just consuming red was good enough!

I really do not have anything to offer you to improve this. I thought it was absolutely perfect and there is no room for improvement!

Write on!

Jenny

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Bill!

Of course this was a fantastic read. Made me laugh out loud too! The subject was slightly disgusting but disgusting things cause great laughs and it sure did that for me!

Write on!

Jenny
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Scott,

This was very well written and quite funny where he went to all the different types of doctors.

Actually this reminds me of a contest I have opening up in May. It's probably terribly wrong of me to plug this in your review but after reading what you wrote, I believe it is right up your alley. Hope to see your entry!
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Jenny
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Jace!

This is a rising stars member to member review.

As always it is great to read your stuff! It kept my attention and made me laugh. Very good read and I see absolutely no room for improvement!

Write on!

Jenny

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Review of On Angel's Wings  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Lorriern,

This was very well written and is the only thing I have read here that has made me cry. I try to avoid reading things that do this to me but I absolutely had to after reading the description. I had a preemie on christmas 13 years ago. He stayed in the nicu for 3 months. He's now a fine 13 year old but during his stay, I saw babies die and have a lot of problems. I made friends with all of the wonderful nurses.

This was very well written and there were no errors.

Write on!

Jenny
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Rit,

I absolutely loved this poem! The words painted such a amazing picture in my mind's eye. I can hear, see and feel throughout this poem. It's not often that I come across a poem that does that for me.

Everything in here was just right. Spelling, punctuation, and the flow of it. Great work!

Write on!

Jenny


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Evildawg,

I have read "Charlie - A Halloween Tale" and I would like to share my thoughts with you about it.

A short little story about a boy and his friends on halloween. I was able to picture everything as I read this The end of the story was not expected and it was a very good twist.

I personally don't see any room for improvement!

Write on!

Jenny


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Review of Favorite Genre  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Ellen!

I voted nonfiction. I really love autobiographies. I also love humor but I didn't see that listed. I would have had a tough time choosing between the two if you had both options up though.

In reference to you being brand new here, I would be happy to show you around if you'd like. *Smile*

Write on!

Jenny
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Review of The Last Guardian  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Jack!

I have read "The Last Guardian" and I would like to offer my thoughts on it.

I absolutely loved the style of writing. It reminded me of the short stories I read in school of the renaissance or romantism era. I don't know if that's what you were going for but that is what it reminded me of. Which is a reason why I loved it so much! I haven't seen a story told like that in a long time.

I enjoyed the very end. That was not what I was expecting.

I see no room for improvement. This story was perfect in punctuation and spelling.

Write on!

Jenny


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Review of Spongebob Poem  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Linda!

I have read "Spongebob Poem" and I would like to offer some thoughts and possible room for improvement.

I happen to love Spongebob and I really like this poem as well. It was to the point. The rhythm of this was great and flowed smoothly.

It may have been just a tad too short. You could have possibly gone more in depth and mentioned Sandy Cheeks, Mr. Krabs, and possibly even Pearl or Plankton. The mention of those other characters would have made it even better than it already is.

Write on!

Jenny


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Review of Writing.Com 101  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Storymistress!

In all my years here, I have never read the faqs. I didn't really need to now but I was just curious. I just came back to wdc after a long hiatis and I actually thought I would read through the faqs to see if there was something I never knew about or forgot. I am happy to report that I still remember everything covered in here.

I must tell ya this....the main reason I am reviewing this is because I have never ever had the opportunity to review a faq and probably will never get the opportunity again! *Laugh*

Write on!

Jenny
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Review of Golden Garbage  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello GreenNerd,

I have read "Golden Garbage" and I would like to share my thoughts on it with you.

This was very well done and I love how you were arguing with the paper. It had a fantastic flow, rhyme, and angry tone.

The only error I encountered was the word "Suprized". That word is actually with an s, not a z. Simple mistake that I make all the time. After all, you spell prize with a z. That's what I've always though, anyway.

Write on!

Jenny


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello mARi,


I have read "Confessions of an Addict" and I would like to offer my thoughts on it.

I personally can relate very well as I'm sure most wdc can also really relate to this. I took a hiatis but I am completely looking forward to getting my addiction back into full swing. *Laugh*


Very well done!

Write on!

Jenny


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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Hello Maria!


I have read "A sleepy battle and I would like to share my thoughts on it.

This was very well written and describes perfectly what a lot of people (myself included) battle nightly or almost nightly. I did not encounter any grammatical errors while reading this. Fantastic piece!

Write on!

Jenny


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello DrSmith,

I have just read You are What you eat and I want to give you my thoughts on it.

This was short and incredible! It gave me a bit of a laugh and I could even picture the people in my head wearing the overalls. Also I heard them speaking. Sure, the spelling made me cringe but that was how the guy was talking. *Laugh* } Great job!

Write on!

Jenny


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Review of The Pets we Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Lisa!

I have read your piece about pets and I wold like to offer my thoughts about it.

I loved this! It mainly focused on dogs and cats but that's ok because those are the more popular types of pets. You did mention the other kinds though as not to leave them out. Not everyone is a dog or cat person. (I, however am a cat person) I think it is true what you said: People without a pet of some sort are definitely missing out!

Write on!

Jenny


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Review of The End  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Keaton!

I have read your poem titled "The End" and I thought I would offer you my opinions about it. The title alone pulled me in to read more. Then I saw how long it was which definitely piqued my curiosity as I don't ever recall seeing a poem on here that length.

There were no grammatical errors and the rhythm of this poem was superbly done!

Write on!

Jenny


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Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Hello Enga!

This was a really great read.....It was short and to the point. With that said, personally I believe that it would have been even better if this was a little bit longer ad a little more detailed. I really was no expecting the letter to be from Nick Sr. hahaha That part made me laugh!

Write on!

Jenny


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