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Review by darlintlc59 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Very emotional piece...it's hard loving and taking care of an addict. You summed it up with those three words... "Protect, "Resolve, "Disown" Good job and Write On!
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Review by darlintlc59 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lovely poem of Mother Nature truly at her best! Not sure I could pick out a favorite part but some are more close to me: "Dew drops glisten on a spider's maze" "The fog lifts into a gentle haze." and the end I love: "This is Mother Nature at her best, Waking from another night's country rest." Thanks for the note on Crimson Rosellas, I knew what a Cockatoo was but not a Rosella. Good luck in the contest and Write On!
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Review by darlintlc59 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This sweet poem is so dear to me as I lost a little girl and had the same pain and finally acceptance of letting go, knowing she was in a better place and we would see each other again. I have not added this poem yet but I would love for you to read it when I do. Thanks for sharing this personal poem. Write On!
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Review by darlintlc59 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Bright and cheerful...puts a smile on my face and a dream of possibilities! Write On!
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Review of Which Way  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Sounds like you are off to start your life as an official grown-up! Lol The world is waiting for you! Very nice flow and rhyme, Write on!
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Review by darlintlc59 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice memory you have shared in such a way that the person reading it can be a part of that memory. Write on! This short poem is what it's all about!
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Review of Oh, Brother.  Open in new Window.
Review by darlintlc59 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is close to my heart...how well I know the strength it takes to love someone enough to fight for them even when they don't want to be fought for. Don't give up and write on!
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Review by darlintlc59 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Lots of emotion going on in this poem. My favorite lines are "emotions draw my words" "as it empties out my heart" and "I paint a worded picture, I paint my life my way." Enjoyed this very much! Write On!!!
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