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I'm writing a new and improved version of Fractured Reality. I marked it v2 to symbolize the change, but I'm leaving the original up as well so that I can look back and forth between them.

I hope you guys enjoy - I went ahead and started from the other side of the war this time!


 Fractured Reality (v2; Chapter 1) Open in new Window. (E)
Two versions of humanity battle for dominance of a single world.
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Just began work on Fractured Reality again! I'm going away with the much-hated prologue and introducing a more comprehensive and overall better first chapter, which means - You guessed it! - Almost an entire overhaul of the story. But I think it'll be worth it.

I'm posting what I have so far as an edit on the original, for those of who you are still interested.
I just made an EXTREMELY extensive change to the beginning of Chapter 2. It will introduce some background and hopefully deal with the extremely redundant intro scene, which is (was) basically revisited later on by Doctor Sevelyan.

Regardless, do me a favor and check it out! If you're up to it, maybe even add in a review that deals with the change. If you'd like, you can even request what was originally there and tell me whether or not you think the change was a good idea.


 Fractured Reality Open in new Window. (18+)
Humans nearly go extinct due to war, then get themselves stuck in a new one. (WIP)




Thanks and have a great day,


Mister Suede
Hello there!! I was wandering around and noticed that you are new to the site, so I wanted to welcome you! If there is anything I can do to help you out, please don't hesitate to ask! :)

-Shana-
Thank you very much! If you're interested, I'd love a review of my first work, Fractured Reality! It's gotten eight reviews so far, but I've just recently made a lot of changes and I want to know what people think about it!


Thanks for the warm welcome,

Mister Suede
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I made some major edits to the Prologue and main story! If you want to know the whole story, I'd suggest rereading it, as the changes affect quite a large bit of it.

Thanks for following!

 Fractured Reality Open in new Window. (18+)
Humans nearly go extinct due to war, then get themselves stuck in a new one. (WIP)
I've just added a some new content to Fractured Reality, go check it out!
 Fractured Reality Open in new Window. (18+)
Humans nearly go extinct due to war, then get themselves stuck in a new one. (WIP)
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