I love it and it shows so much of how deep we really are. I suffer through depressed and this site has also helped me so much. I think the world needs to slow down. For me it's running much to fast and I think the world is out of control. We all have to have something.
Diane
Such a great tribute to your Father. I wish I would've had mine while growing up. I could only imagine. My little girl who is 22 has just such a Father and so does my little boy who is 25. My husband was more married to them than to me but it was worth it.
Keep writing.
Diane
Great. I feel the stress lifting. I teach Water Aerobics at the local gym and use noodles for making muscle develop. I feel so good and can sleep. There's something freeing about water.
Very good. I felt your pain one time over a 1st love/marriage. It took forever even after I divorced him not to feel my heart fall from my chest. You did an excellent job.
Review my work. I did a poem on my current husband. I think the name of it is "I can't."
Diane
I really liked this poetry because it was done in such a free style and brought into light how we come to be. Something that we do time and again is so amazing to me and for some reason you were so able to catch that in the moments. It makes you wonder if we do things over and over in the concept of reincarnation. That with life we begin but we know what we are to do from the beginning. We start out with crawling then proceed to walk through this life as others did. You did an excellent job. This is the kind of poetry that I read in the late sixties and early seventies. I hope to see more of your works in the future.
Diane
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I really liked your poem. It flowed very easily and the langage was so great. Really I found it as a love poem to Chris. This would be a great prayer to send in to Guideposts. You truly showed us the love of God and used words that account for such a wonderful glimsp of our Lord.
This was really a different essay than the usual ones written for the sunrise contest. I really liked it because it made me think for awhile about how a day starts and begins like a newborn and ends as a mature person. This was good. I like the images that it causes to come into my brain.
Good work. Keep writing.
Diane
Really a good poem. I love the images because the water and the sun are good friends of mine because I am a part time water aerobic instructor. I can feel what you feel in the poem. I think this is a good thing because it relays to me that your voice is in this poem. Good job. Keep it up.
Diane
Sara,
I really liked this...silence is golden that's for sure. I wrote something on nature in the last couple of days. I love the dawning of morning, going outside and feeling everything for the first time that day. Sometimes I wish the feeling would last all day but there is always tomorrow.
Diane
I really liked this; it is exactly as a Mother feels all of her life toward her children. There's not a night that goes by that I don't wait for a call from mine who are not living at home now. Great. Keep up the good work.
Surely a man's story but I enjoy reading how you guys think. What makes a man love a car so much? I've never understood that and when they get one...like my hubby's 1951 Chevy Bel-Aire Deluxe, he wants to sell it, trade it, something. My first husband was also in love with his 1972 Chevy souped up car with these little things that held the hood down. Beautiful blue but were we in trouble when we got married. Someone put those flowers on the car with electrical tape. Cause for divorce right there...not a great beginning. Speaking of cars, Sunday at Mother and Father in laws doing what? Watching NASCAR of course. The heart of Alabama.
We all need prayer warriors to make it through each and everyday. These days there is so much bad in the world that I am starting to try and do good things everyday. God is good and will protect me from Evil.
Diane
I loved that piece and it was just at the right timing that I should read it. I've been so down and out and I should turn things over to God and leave them there and never take them back. I am reading Purpose Driven Life and Joel Osteen's book and both these books remind us how worthy we are of God's love. Each one of us has our own genetic code which makes each of us one of a kind. We are meant to be here and each of us has a purpose that God wants us to do.
I loved it. I can just picture the setting. A place I'd like to be reading "An Artist Way" getting new ideas on writing.
Keep on writing. You are good. Are you still in High School? I wished I would've continued especially with my journal. Also, scrapebooks are great. Smiling!
Diane
I really liked that and it helps to read something like that since I am going through depression. My garden, this year is beautiful. I am transplanting, planting new things, etc. To put my hands back in the earth helps with my head. I've been through alot in the past year and a half but I'm moving on slowly but surely. Keep writing. I think it's when we are at our lowest that are truest thoughts come alive.
Diane
I feel your pain as I battle with depression everyday. I am trying to put in some positive thoughts so that I can create a habit in order to overcome these thoughts. Antidepressants aren't helping much when I think it is situational. I feel like an actress sometimes just putting on a happy face and telling funny stories.
Writing will get it all out and possibly we'll both pull through. Wish you could check mine out. My writings like a roller coaster. Up one day down the next.
Explaining more of what Wicca is all about would be helpful in this work. Some people are not familar with Wicca, being a witch so they might think it as something bad. I knew a kind witch one time and I respected her beliefs. I am a Christian, but as a Christian I think we should take care of the Earth as the Wicca religion believes. I am afraid when you don't describe the Wicca beliefs you lay yourself open into being cased as a bad witch and I know in my heart you are a good one.
I've seen so many die with cancer and this is what most of them say so I do think your piece caputured what living with cancer is all about. Keep writing.
Very good. I come from a broken home but didn't have a Father from the age of 2 until I looked him up at 16! He still doesn't have much to do with me and it hurts because we are so much alike. I do think my Mom doesn't like me because I am so much like him and he left her. And I am 50 years young. I would rather have had no Father at all than a bad one and have expressed this to him.
Keep writing you are good.
diane
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