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Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
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Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
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Can't think of any I don't like.
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I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Generation Xerox - the idea that not only are you identical to your ancestors, but your descendants will be identical to you. Now, I don't know how true that is - farming is in my blood on both sides, I'm surrounded by farmland (all surrounding fields have corn - cow corn - at the moment), but I can't find the energy to grow the garden I want to have. I don't know. Might be something there though.

Thoughts
An interesting thing to think on.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "On What is Boring" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Boring, when there's nothing to do,. and nothing is going on. Funny thing is, you've mentioned having issues with AI stories. Some folks don't like them. Me - I find them to be a way to kill 20 minutes to an hour, especially if walking, mowing, or doing some other mind-numbing task. Some dramas hook you with a plausible realistic hook, and even though you'll figure it's fiction within five minutes, you'll still listen for the twenty or so minutes it plays. Personally, I prefer sci-fi stories. Some are very good.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of The Voice  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A spelunking guide is trying to locate a missing teenager that's lost in a cave system. The cave has a legend around it, where it was where Native Americans would place their dead in it, to send them to the Afterlife. It seems that the young man took a wrong turn and got lost. Now the Guide is trying to follow the man's voice, trying to locate him. Will he be able to?

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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for entry "August 5 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Sometimes we just need a day to ourselves, one where we spend time playing with our children, or our pets. Or, we just clean those areas of the house that we'd put off cleaning for a while. Or, maybe, we get to work on those stories that have been floating around in our brain for so long. There is always something we can do on our days off.

Thoughts
Makes one think about things.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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for entry "July 31 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The ache of missing those no longer here. There's dogs I miss seeing running around. I wish that I had known my grandfathers better, that my one grandma was still alive, and I wish that I'd had a chance to go fishing and hunting with a cousin of mine. There's always folks we miss. The trick is to increase the number of friends we have, so that, one day, we can introduce them to those that went before.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "Strings Attached" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
The world's smallest violin is a drawing of one. There's no way it can play, so one will never hear it play. This could be a blessing or a curse. Still, makes me wonder what will happen when they make an orchestra full of all the instruments, including those not usually seen in one - that would be a whole lot of fun, and a comedy tour.

Thoughts
Makes one think about things.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
The heat of Summer, versus the cold of Winter. Both are opposites, opposite time of year, types of temperature and weather effects. One can cook you. The other can freeze you. Both have their dangers. Both have their wonders. Opposite sides of the same coin. So, what happens when they are talked about in the same breath? That is a very good question to ask.

Thoughts
A nice piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "Y'all-Inclusive" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Language is always evolving. New words are created, and others are dropped from use. Some words, the definition of them has changed, or additional ones have been added. Even the same phrase can mean something different a few decades down the road. For instance, Mustang could mean a wild horse or a type of car. Some languages, like Latin, have no living native speakers, but hold meaning for scientific purposes, and even have offspring, in a sense. Others, no one speaks or writes them, or uses altered forms of them. Even English is different - American English, British English, and Australian English are different, and that's without factoring in regional variations.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "Enduring Durian" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Durian - a fruit with a smell so pungent, it is banned from a lot of places. Can't say that I've ever had it. Would I try it though? If someone knew what they were doing, and prepared it eight, maybe. Sometimes we see a food and go - "I ain't eating that!" only for someone to encourage us (one way or another) to try it. Sometimes we like it. Other times, we love it. Then there are times we don't like it. But we never know until we try it.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "First Light" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A picture is worth a thousand words - or so it has been said. For the past 150+ years, folks have been taking pictures of pretty much everything that they can, from people, to animals, to scenes in nature. For this, we can all blame the French, who came up with the prototypes for making pictures.

Thoughts
Makes one think about things.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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for entry "July 19 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Cats - owned more than a few, dealt with, and still deal with, plenty more. Some just make noise for attention. Others come up to you while you are sitting. Some have no issues with you petting them. Others - don't even try to place your hands near them - you'll pull back a mangled stump if you're not quick enough. Always something.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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for entry "July 17 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Let's see, making plans for today... Well, at some point this evening, I hope to have chicken wings with my brother - depending on how things go. As for the rest, well, that depends too. Hope to add to an interactive or two, maybe go for a walk - actually, I need to do that anyways. Maybe read a book, watch a movie. It all depends on what I feel like doing.

Thoughts
A nice piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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for entry "What A Day It's Been!" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Let's see - today, first there was work. Someone asking for one fruit/vegetable, and/or another. Wasn't too bad actually. Then there was the freaking rain. Lots of it. Cold, wet, damp - not fun to walk in at all. Finally, there was Dungeons and Dragons - that was a lot of fun. Won a battle by the skin of our teeth. Now to deal with the minions we didn't deal with.

Thoughts
Makes one think about their day.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Carrion Luggage  Open in new Window.
for entry "Material Reads" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Books - why do we read them? There are many reasons - the big one - besides school and work necessity - is entertainment. They can take us to different worlds - other planets, different dimensions, alternative histories, and many more. We read them to kill time. We read them to get new ideas. We read them for so many reasons, we lose count after a while.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
An interesting poll - Indiana Jones Versus Lara Croft. To be fair, I'm more familiar with Indiana Jones than I am with Lara. Indiana Jones is set in the 1930's with his last two in the later 50's and 60's. Lara Croft is set in the 90's to early 2000's (unless otherwise proven differently). Now, something to keep in mind is - what obstacles are these two dealing with? Human enemies, dinosaurs, supernatural entities, each other? All of this could change the outcome.

Thoughts
An interesting poll.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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for entry "July 13 2025" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Writer's block, Crazy cats, and hearing nice things. All seem to happen, in one manner or another. Writer's Block hits me every so often on some things - get to a certain point, and I'm like, "So, what do I do next?" Crazy cats - there's several at this horse riding facility, including one with a meow that just sounds pitiful, when I know he's treated well. Likewise, it's nice to hear nice things about our work.

Thoughts
An interesting piece.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Parrots versus meteors. One is a group of brightly colored birds. The other is a bunch of flying space rocks. Both can be very beautiful to watch. Or, they can be very scary - especially if there's an extra huge meteor aimed at the Earth, or if there's a version of The Birds (or another bird-themed horror movie) involving murderous parrots (don't know if there is any but I know that their shrieking can be annoying).

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Zaya (Vixen)  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting image for a character you have - Zaya Vixen. You even have a brief bio for her - likes, dislikes, and even a bit about her history. This is useful to know. Might even encourage folks to add to stories involving her, in one form or another. Kinda cute.

Thoughts
It's a cute image.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Two suggestions come to mind.

1. If this is a character you have for a story written here, post a link to it.

2. It might be a good idea to talk a bit more about her history, so that folks know her better.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Poetry  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A cute selection of poetry to read. Poems tend to be based on one emotion or another. Many are short, and others are long. A poem comes from the heart. Some fit to a form of some sort. Others have no formal form, but fit an emotional one. All are worth the read, and are very enjoyable. I hope that more find them.

Thoughts
A nice selection of poems to read. I enjoyed them.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Legacy - lessons and stories passed on down from our ancestors. This might even include items and locations, not to mention buildings, that are part of the family inheritance. Sometimes it leads to something incredible. Other times, the legacy is something dark, and best left forgotten. Always something.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Your Kingdom  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Ah, a rather interesting question; If you could create a kingdom, what kind would it be. Well, first off - I'd like to know if there's any rules or limitations? Must it be realistic? Is Magic, Fantasy, Sci-fi, and that sort of stuff allowed? Are characters from movies and video games allowed? Must it be PG friendly, or is NSFW stuff allowed? These sorts of things can create different kingdoms with different rules.

Thoughts
An interesting topic of discussion.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Find all of those fluffy floofs! All the Fs, Ls, Os, and Es, and a few Ss. Are you up to the chalange of finding ten or so versions of the same word? Or, perhaps, you just got attacked by your own bundle of floof. Annoying those four-legged critters can be. Playing innocent they like to do. Trouble they be.

Thoughts
A cute piece to look at and have fun with.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "Laughter and Me" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Sometimes one must laugh. It doesn't need to be big, it doesn't even need to be the funniest thing ever, but laughing means something important - "I'm still alive." I remember reading a Star Wars book, where a couple of Clone Troopers tried to raid an enemy base by going through the sewer system, and they make a breach, and get splattered by waste. Cue both of these highly trained soldiers burst out in laughter, with the main character trooper thinking to themselves that laughing was the oldest "All Clear" signal.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "On True Friendship" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Friendship - one of the most valuable and sacred treasures, alongside of love, hope, and faith. For a friend, one would do impossible things. There are stories about people doing things for their friends, like going on a four thousand mile road trip, just to deliver their friend's remains to their family. Others take down criminal organizations because of what the criminal's did to a friend. Perhaps real life doesn't do things like that, but some come close, and other make fiction seem plausible.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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Review of Daily Cascade  Open in new Window.
for entry "Memories and Dreams" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
First things first - Happy Anniversary!

Memories and dreams - one lets us look back into the past, the other lets us look into a possible future. We use both as inspiration for the things we make - stories written, drawings penned, sculptures carved, and many more We might back something based off of a memory, or of an idea we had while sleeping. Both can help define who we are as a person.

Thoughts
Makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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