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Wow! Great job on your double acrostic. I always found it a challenge to do! This one is unique in its romantic theme. I like its simplicity. The words "you are my only" says it all. Repeating the idea of a forever love emphasizes the love vibe. 
Wow! You really put a shocking twist to this episode in Peter Pan! Dark! 
I think it really fit the prompt which I assume was something about changing up a fairy tale.
I wondered why you did not use the article "a" before "Young boy" and "the" before "Children" near the end.
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This was a great distraction for bed rest and brought back memories of our time in the rabbit hole! 
I found it a challenge so great word choices. I noticed a lot of spaces in the puzzle itself, likely as you put spaces between phrases or words in your list. I usually put them all as one word in case it gives clues.
Wow! This poem really touched me as I thought about all the lost children. I could hear the sadness in the parental voice and the idea that she felt the child was waiting for her. How tragic. It sounds like she is not free of it. Not knowing must be hard.
The voice is consistent as I read aloud. The poet pondering about the events is a clear image. The flow and soundscape was effective in a free style way. The rhyme scheme was well planned. Repeating the "waiting" is emphatic and your use of some repeating letter sounds add to the soundscape.
The last line had an definite impact and changed the vibe with the but...like reality set in as the poet returns from his pondering and memory. I like how the night sky spoke to him and hoped he believed that the lost one was still present in some etheric way. So the last line broke that idea in a way. The sadness of the reality of loss struck home. Well done!
I felt sad for his loss and sadder at the end. What a waste. Yet, it felt like he gave the gift he was meant to give..to his mother and you! 
Thanks so much for sharing this inspiring story. I was touched.
The style suits the theme and tone. Your rhymes are well chosen and assist the flow. I thought the repetition of certain phrases were very effective, especially the "seeking the gate" phrase. It ties the two verses together, emphasizing one has to seek. The last verse gives more detail as to what is beyond the gate. The image is light and it contrasts the first verse image well. I liked the reference to the limited sight of the physical. 
Hey, hey! How did I miss reviewing this poem? I enjoy always the whimsical positive vision and voice of your poems. You make winter sound magical and delightful by describing the wonders of the season. It could make one forget the down sides! 
Thanks for sharing your cheery vision that inspired me to enter into the good vibes of winter. I appreciate your sense of joy and wonder. 
I enjoyed the flow our your free style with rhyme that rocks. I could sense the thrill and movement of the ride in the way you use evocative action words and the pace of the flow. The first line engaged me with its direct invitation. Well done. It sounds fun.
A few puzzlements on punctuation: I wondered if you need a comma after "down the street" in line three and should there be a period after "cries" and "gas" as the next line begins a new idea on its own. 
Hello Big Bad Wolf! It was a stay in bed day so I was checking out activities to pass the time. I like word searches and came across your folder filled with activities. It was a great idea to list all the fun in one place. 
I am not sure why "Of me" is capitalized. 
The structure of this was appealing too. I liked how you changed around the order of the elements heading each verse as you repeat to emphasize the topic. The summative couplet at the end is effective too and brings us full circle to the beginning of the poem. 
The vocabulary fits the theme and your rhymes are awesome. Use of repeating sounds also add to the potency of reading aloud. I love the line "perfecting the lotus, petal by petal". Brilliant.
Thank you for sharing this inspiring expression and your gift. I loved it!
I was drawn right into your vivid imagery from the first line. Piles of food and blood red punch
The warning tone is effective in the sixth line. 
I had to read the last line again as I pondered the idea of changing "with" to "from". Just a puzzlement. 
The form uses the 5-7-5 syllable style and has a turning point that makes me want to smile. Using the present tense fits the rule of having the event happen in the moment. I think you can leave off the capital letters as haiku generally does not use them. The lines flow together as one sentence to paint a picture. True haiku does not use sentences but phrases. Still, it was entertaining and gave me something to think about. Haiku prompts readers to enter the scene and find their own experience. This inspired my own memories of cows so I could enter your view! Made me laugh. 
Happy Spring Richard! Thanks for participating in our Free for All March Raid. Here is one of your reviews from your winning prize! 
I like the way your message shows the history of music and types and song with references to myth, history and sagas. Your words convey so many ideas. The image of the "song's coals" made me think of early peoples singing around fires and the idea of saga words drifting made me think of early bard's tales that could go on and on. I like how you describe the variance of musical rhythms too. 
Oh my gosh! This ad is so funny as well as being seriously convincing.The last line was perfect and we all would hope so. 
I think appealing the environmental issues and the techy aspects makes this ad of interest to a wide audience. Even compulsive cleaners would love it!
The tone of the piece is friendly and inviting and you give lots of reasons why it would make a perfect purchase. Your ideas are so creative and original. I laughed aloud at the "bluetooth capabilites." 
I like how you add a bit of history in your reference to the inventor of the toilet and the name you give yours is brilliant. Everyone likes Super...heroes or super anything. Or a smart toilet. 
I wondered about making "it will give your bathroom..." it's own sentence as opposed to a phrase. Or better yet... something like "to your home, giving your bathroom the swanky.." so it flows freely as a phrase. 
This poem clearly illustrates your theme and how you feel about it. I even picked up a feeling that you see some hope....if man will listen. The point about being fed by the mother should hit a heart in them, yet I suppose with years of society norms make some attitudes automatic. The world is changing though, and voices like yours are a light! 
I had to laugh at the dog monopoly! Very inventive idea for the prompt. The trip on the train was charming and I like how you incorporated some Wonderland characters and the Goat's story about the billy goats Gruff and the nursery rhyme references like the cow over the moon! Wonderful imagination! 
I liked your take on manners. References to etiquette I am sure many folks today have no idea. Your jury folks were interesting and I like how you used some made up characters that might live in Wonderland.
and the Queen's tarts if you know where they are. Save some for us fellow pawn... we may join you if we do not lose our heads.