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10k views, 2x BestPoetryCollection. A nothing from nowhere cast words to a world wide wind

I had a lover's quarrel with the world - Robert Frost

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I'm sorry you got caught in the middle. - me


This poet’s words collect, arrange on a kaleidoscope spectrum. The experience of discovery through writing is the truest reward that has allowed me to grow and learn who/what I am — what other people get naturally, immediately, while I stomp around in it.

Been blessed, but pushing it — envelope, world and all inhabitants away. Push buttons, find boundaries to trip traps. No clue why cat curiosity, living in your dark. (Bored, perhaps?)

Now and then, push dirt out of this hole; someone/thing/entity might envision me how I need to be viewed (if I knew what that was). Cryptic, yes. Try living in my dark, find comfort amid strange, virtual, wonderful walls that tower above, tempt me to scale.

Been more than I could imagine or expect here. But, achievements aren’t going on a LinkedIn wall *Think*. I dig deeper than I should, often without forethought. Aimless words, brave or veiled cowardice, flinchingly flung, inadvertently hit targets? Get a ‘back off’ shoulder shot when asking your motivations here. Not fair?

No prize to eye; not incentivized. Dealt the worst two cards before the flop, do best with what’s in hand.



My Pluggers:
You are an icon here.*BigSmile*
You suffer, but you suffer brilliantly. Wow, what a great writer.*Heart*


It’s like plugging myself, but using other people’s (reviewers) words…Review of "Poetic Referendum(s) On Life"
Your poetic muse is on fire! *Fire* Some great emotion, well-balance(d), lovely lyrical qualities -- even the ones that were written out of sadness or anger came through in a clever cadence…It's obvious you've put a lot of work into each entry and the totality of the blog has eye appeal. *Cool*

 
Published four times with one a literary journal, including… *PointRight*   "The Tender Core (Sedona)
I don’t submit because it’s too much work. Truly alone, know no one cares to show they believe/support me. Lip service feeds delusion. I’ve seen a lot of smoldering and snow. Try not be cynical, work hard at openness and consideration — work, sooo…gut thing.

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Love my process constructing and sharing visions in words collected (no small task considering personal and physical limitations, see below).


August 28, 2006 this blog opened

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SuperNova Afterglow: End Of Days  (18+)
All that remains: here in my afterlife as a 'mainstream' blogger, with what little I know.
#1300042 by Brian K Compton


No specific aim going forward (2014)

 
What I used to say: 'Maybe, I just don't get it. Watch me fumble with my version of reality, expose ignorance as truth. You don't have to get me, either. But, wish someone would explain me to myself.' Now I say: *Cool* *FacePalm* Now: I was such a whore.
 


*Laugh*This is old….
What? Oh, this? A rhetorical, self-motivational speech I'm working on.
Don't just read the parts to construct your theory, as if to confirm (construed out of context) your opinion, mentally-stunted Neanderthal. Therapist wants me to be less negative toward myself. I see it as attacking, rather than being defensive. Fear I will chomp too many bullets unintentionally sent toward the unsuspecting.
If you can be triggered for stupid reasons, then I?
…just looked like me rolling around on the floor with myself.*RollEyes*
             



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Who am I, you ask? My mirror knows that question, repeated daily.

Just trying to create a little buzz, not boost my ego.

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Can you believe it took this long for someone to put a quarter in me and push the button GET ANGRY?
 

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January 1, 2020 at 12:52pm
January 1, 2020 at 12:52pm
#972382

I'll write you sonnets, if you witness
Vacuous, hollow words contained
Restrained by structure
Ever toiling to find meaning
Or
Run amok in a field of words
Harvesting life's little treasures
Unkempt, sprawling, falling out
Of pants pockets before I shove
In your tall glass with my water.
See, Mommy, isn't it pretty?
Agree?
Fuck You!
How does that make you feel??



I won't explain, you won't get it.

1.7.20

Making Public again. Embracing it now.
January 1, 2020 at 12:22pm
January 1, 2020 at 12:22pm
#972378
I have perfect, adjusted vision yet I'm legally blind, you see...

Return of Idealism (Unbarred)?

You know what I miss more than hope and
Much less than ambition?
Idealism
And the notion you can achieve dreams
So long as they align with
Those who could stand in your way.

You know what I could do without?
Far less than carbs sticking to these ribs?
Way more than corporations
Tracking my every movement
Through every 'smart' device?
Social media
What a tool -- clicked, liked
Transparently forming self-actualization until
Your crypto-world deemed
Worthless.

You know what I desire/like/miss
(Check all that apply)?
Simple
Climbing trees for red, juicy,
Mouthwatering harvest; nurturing
Replenishing, sustaining life.
Rebuild the legs,
Restore the heart,
Atrophy a mind plundered.

Could you just be my friend?

Reach for my hand across
This unknowable abyss.
See blue eyes gleam, not jaded;
Full, reflecting -- a bridge
Strong enough to hold both of us;
If you trust,
If your heart can be pure, again,
If you will just dream like me.

Who's the influencer now (yes/no)?

We can pull away from that realm,
Crumbling like molten rock
Into the unknowable chasms
Of a million helpless souls
(No chance to swim across)?
Restore
Vision
See
It's a notion --
Compartmentalized thought
Spilling over into the cubicles
Of division implored we not bound,
Ascend.


-- The Categorized (from Dreamless Heart Still Swimming A Raging, Relentless Sea)
Autobiography doesn't exist (dead link)
         And more things I'll think up for you to ignore, since I'm not going extinct like the 'Others'
(First 'poem' of 2020)
DEBATE ME!
December 31, 2019 at 11:33am
December 31, 2019 at 11:33am
#972309

When I found this website in 2006, I was running away from all the disappointment in my personal life. Sorry I brought all my baggage here instead of unburdening it before I walked through this portal door. I can’t undo the past. I am a leopard but only because I’m stained by my past.
I can’t change my default as an untrusting person as one who’s been bullied, abused and taken advantage of lifelong. I had/have misplaced bouts of anger (that I’ve dealt with), but put mostly behind me. I do put on appearances of one in control because I do not want to relive the shame and humiliation of my past — nor be vulnerable to manipulation.
That is why (in this segregated culture) I have had my misgivings. I have tried to put forth my best self, feel I degraded myself for acceptance. I have felt kinship here, but limited in association by walls that surround. I’m not ungrateful, just cautious. I did reciprocate within reason when called upon.
Because of the fires in my belly, I’ve grown. But, I’m not rolling over anymore. I keep my underside protected. I respect what you all do here. I just have to be for myself and yearn for unconditional acceptance...harder to find.
As honest as I can be. I’m sorry to all for our misunderstandings and misgivings. We both missed the boat. Sorry if you misunderstand my need for something as close to clarity as can be. Tired of stepping in it.

Just know: I won’t go away when there are still words to be said. My disabilities cannot impede either. My will is strong, stronger than you can imagine for one who struggles.

I can tag all those who’ve motivated me throughout the years (like I’ve done before) but you know who you are.

Typed with giant forefinger on Iphone with diminished vision. The force is great with this one. Let the typos be revealed!
December 31, 2019 at 10:29am
December 31, 2019 at 10:29am
#972305

Rhyming Thoughts Spun
Now My Story's Done


It’s the next word on your eager tongue.
Don’t know where inspiration came from --
Just audacious thoughts placing bets.
But then, there's no takers, just regrets.
If you don't let the bilge spill,
Empty 'til you get your fill.
Haphazard notebooks, scraps of paper --
Forming sentences arrive, disappear in vapor.
From this clouded brain come foggy whims,
Uneven melodies, jotted hymns
No choir would approach, harmonize,
Let alone perform, would rather demonize.

It's the last word on this tongue,
Until the next wayward inspiration flung.


\
14 lines, rhyming couplets

The next rhyming poem inspired by Brenpoet moving house *HeartV*







d1931
December 25, 2019 at 11:44am
December 25, 2019 at 11:44am
#972025
Second place tie in Taboo Words Contest, December, 2019 --


Red laces adorn white leather
atop pearly steel.
Metal flashes, frozen splashes --
twirl to toe, spin and clear.
Coast the soft, oval plain.
Lofty, tin speakers
pump oldies in vain.
Wheeling through winter,
heart hiding, soul confiding,
these crystal-blue eyes stared
when I saw you,

still night in cool air.
When Will I See You Again
echoes, warped through time.
Perfect-white, wool petticoat
emblazoned you upon shadowed
bluffs of snow with Molly Jean,
whose looks lingered longer.
Brief whispers witnessed;
you took sidelong glances,
circuitous journeys away.
Bundled, small boys falling
in sweaty moon boots,
lifted up by your arms.
I pined to be helpless, too:
         share hot cocoa, a bench
         to unwrap, unlace, release
         trapped heat in that winter shed --
         see your chest heave in whiter sweater.

I waited for you to look back,
only to fade into black night
with damned plumes and taillights
from your father's Vista Cruiser.
Heart sighing, soul denying,
these crystal-blue eyes recall
with the radio repeating melodies
down the forgotten hall.
Steel rusts, a soul distrusts,
but coast the soft, oval plain
as dim Winter returns again.


Mixed: rhyming verses around freeverse story
40 lines



Poem began as a mess:

Taboo Words Contest

Metal flashes, frozen splashes
Twirl to toe, spin and clear
Coast the soft, oval plain
Lofty tin speakers
Pump oldies in vain
Heart gliding, soul confiding
wheeling through winter's
Sentimental fare

Still night in cool air


White leather trimmed
red laces
Top your pearly steel

To song, When Will I See You Again echoing through crusty speakers
You in thick wool petticoat against snow bluffs with Molly Jean
She perhaps stared longer while you took sidelong glances on your circuitous journey
Mostly away from me
Boys in rubber winter boots slide and fall helped up by the likes of you
Youth, my vigor
Winters pining to sip hot cocoa with you in the shed
Wishing to share a bench, unlace, unwrap long enough to cool winter wool’s trapped heat and sweat

See your chest heave in that sweater, inviting clutches I could only envision

December 24, 2019 at 8:02pm
December 24, 2019 at 8:02pm
#971996
Too late for entry..."Invalid Item

Prompt was:

Snowman in a snow globe.

Late offering:

Snow Globe at Christmas

Frozen scene, unshaken,
A collapsed world encased
Waiting the clutch of the boy,
Grown since last year.
Make it snow, make it snow!
Dream again.
Snuggle within as the yearling
Huddles with your snowman.
What tiny hands crafted
The bright red cardinal
That it would sit pretty for
Childlike imagination?

Hidden memory,
Each year removed
From bubble wrap by parents.
Forgotten realm,
Annually returning joy,
Shakes to life a youthful heart,
Eternally -- shimmering dome
By Christmas tree, inviting
amid peppermint and holly.
Twinkle lights their stars,
Within each seasonal night
To eternal delight.
December 21, 2019 at 1:07am
December 21, 2019 at 1:07am
#971801
...in my Notebook, which winds up in newsfeed, which you might not care to hear. So, I post where you can pry...

Finally got the lid on that box
Nailed it shut?
It probably won't hold --
A temporary fix
Just felt like saying
It's closed...shut
Nope, I don't even have to look
I could peek in the morning
Making no plans to check on that cat.
Now closing my eyes
Rare occurrence but
I've done this before
A cage?
That is not my area of expertise.


12.21.19
December 7, 2019 at 8:09pm
December 7, 2019 at 8:09pm
#971116
Sexual assault is something that is seen on college campuses, libraries, or any public place across the world. At the beginning of my second semester of college, I attended a party where a man felt that he could reach his hand down my shirt and touch me. This is not something I had shared with people. I had always told myself I would smack a guy to next Sunday if he ever touched me in a way I didn't consent to. But when it happened, my whole body froze and I was in such a shock that I just stood there and walked away after he removed his hand. I didn't tell people because I felt ashamed and embarrassed that it happened. When I finally worked up the courage to tell select people, some of those people decided it was their right to talk about what happened to me with others. Not only was it humiliating when I found out that my privacy had been invaded, but I was shattered when I found out that the response of some of the people was that I was asking for it. Yes, I was at a party, but since when does my location consent for me? I was wearing jeans and a sweatshirt, my clothing did not consent for me. My beverage did not consent for me, my make up did not consent for me, and the atmosphere of the party did not consent for me. In no way did I ask for what happened, and in no way do the other girls who are assaulted ask for what happened to them. We act like men aren't responsible for their actions when they are around other women. We also act like sexual assault is something that is frowned upon to talk about, but we should support people who have the courage to confide in us with their stories. EVERYONE has the right to their own body, but just because you feel confident in your right to yours, it does not give you the right to mine.


She attends my church
December 1, 2019 at 12:16pm
December 1, 2019 at 12:16pm
#970797

Dark Corners

The anti-inhibitants loiter in dark corners
Where highball divers leap from shelves,
Swim daringly amid ice rocks and swords
With the colorful, impaled vegetation.
Diamond-sparked, transparent sphere clutched
In my god-sized hand drained weightless
Into an empty, deflecting village of hope --
Ambition hiding, reluctant to join
The scene nestled in an activated mind.
More pleasured, a human water globe now
Unshaken, settles-in warm, sleeps
The remaining pale winters in dark corners.



https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/inhibition

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Snow_globe

It's about insulating, deflecting after experiences teach us old-timers it's too late to go all in. The time for risk was youth. Can't recover from mistakes if you don't try. Life less messy instructs to hit the recliner with a favorite drink, distraction, or sleep until dead.
Sorry to spoil it, but you read it before I explained, sooo...
November 27, 2019 at 10:37pm
November 27, 2019 at 10:37pm
#970585
This was supposed to be better...work in progress or give up?

Thursday Plan

It's in the sink,
Our Thursday plan,
Thawing like fifty-some memories
Filling pages of a lost album --
Hanging black photo mounts,
Some askew, taunt like
Faded handwriting, illegible
On coarse Manila background.
But a dark blue roasting pan
Shelters a 12-pound fowl
From two prowling, curious cats.

Tradition, reason to be thankful?
For jellied cranberries, marshmallow
yams? Mashed potatoes, anytime. Yes,
Not for soon dried-out bird hauled from
12-foot freezer to checkout
To four by four traction (over
A dry, hurried and hazardous road);
Marinate, pre-heat, season, store
Our turkey in a mindless oven,
Baste gloriously -- haloed yellow
Through a dim, thick window.
Assemble, sit, pray, eat; grow duller
Never reflecting, but deflect --
Sprawled on soft, reclining frames
Of woven fabric, beneath the cover
Of colorful, comfortable throws.
Make room for leftovers
And the next dying season.
November 24, 2019 at 8:21pm
November 24, 2019 at 8:21pm
#970415
What can I prove here more than the words I share in this internet village? It's an unknowable game of push and pull, where I find I could be an element within certain neighborhoods. The words are cheery, greetings sincere. What is missing makes me feel like a wallflower at the dance, the kid who wasn't recruited to play on that team, the child who grew up and saw his little brother get all the women's attention? A life of mental conditioning and responses of distrust brought me along.

I don't need my cheeks pinched, better than most athletes I could dance circles around ladies manhandled across this floor -- the great divide. So, I journey about. Let me sit on the tallest hill and gaze upon the scene, pen my words into unseen pages under protective trees and my competent voice will echo songs down the valley that one might hear and join for awhile.

The dream is being found...where you are. The vision is not selling short and yearn love unconditional. The hope is learn from the past to be a better person who loves oneself foremost...no worries, no regrets. This quest never truly sought be alone.

The time is nearing on this quiet summit -- a feint heart undisturbed can rest. The sun will ply pleasant-smelling boughs to renew my heart daily. The moon will return to charm pale blue eyes that once did gleam...for all-of-you. If I didn't give back enough, I could recline 19 more years -- linger in the memories of ignorance corrupting innocence and wish I could see her fresh, full face one more time and kiss deeply, full on tender lips.

I'll never grow old if I hide. I can only die, when you accept me.

All I really want is something beautiful to say
To never fade away, I wanna live forever!


November 24, 2019 at 10:36am
November 24, 2019 at 10:36am
#970392
https://twitter.com/glaedrfly/status/1198625224138338306?s=21

I might delete twit post...

Sorry To Bug You

Below the break
Semi-hidden
Confessions?
Confusions?
A place where hope
Positioned just so
Gives chance or
Serendipity
A mirror
Aimed directly at
The soul of a poet --
Soon deflecting
To write
Another day
Below the break...

November 24, 2019 at 10:16am
November 24, 2019 at 10:16am
#970389
None of us can stay young forever
but in our hearts


Wither where you may hide.
Sing your song in the shadows
That someone might hear --
Unless they might near --
Then, like a cricket
Make yourself scarce.
Hide your true love for any creature
More beautiful, showy,
Unknowing your intent to mate
With their words of appreciation,
Should they hear autumnal offerings.
Experience attuned
Echoes off nearby trees in the night.
Never let them visualize the messenger.
Just --
Give them your caged song to carry
In their (as yet) unburdened heart
That they might find and share
With their true love. And your parting --
Just
Whispers in the sheltered branches
Rising like steam to join wayward clouds.
They dispense your love like seeds
To the decaying ground -- hope
For renewal. Lose any memory
Of what you are.

28 lines

November 24, 2019 at 9:03am
November 24, 2019 at 9:03am
#970384
Entropy Out The Clever Window

In great solitude
I climb into your room,
Though the lobby would be fine.
We both know space here can be
Accessed by anyone flowing freely.
I'm learning your comfort has no arms
But ways of holding me that restrict.
I unpin this wrap, remove shoes,
Find a closet and shelf with affordable space
for things, whatever I chose
Hide away or bring out.
I could come sans clothes down your lobby
With no ill intent: beautiful, glowing.
Yet with noble conceit to seek patrons,
Earn praises or silence -- notice
These stays are brief, a distraction
From your events planned, intended
For true guests. Outlived, I ascend
With hollow offers to stay, knowing
By now, I won't pay but return to
My empty suite to the few belongings
Shelved and arranged just so that
If someone should visit, should comment,
Should want to know how I emigrated,
Travelled well on this journey
That provided such beautiful things,
That I...that I could...find
Some sense of closure in unpurposed
Visitation in this grand manner, addicted
With key, my own warden.

The night stretches long, thinner.
Entropy growing more beautiful (unwitnessed), fading.
My Autumn nears Winter chill.
Molecules irreversible changing.
No longer able to exit the lone chair
Aim an eye from door to window
(My clever little entry here)
That begs me now
Escape.

Life can be dehumanizing to those who struggle within it, unable to fake it for those who hiss 'don't mess up our party.'

Should that have been part of the poem? Feels like it is, I'll leave it alone.
November 23, 2019 at 4:25pm
November 23, 2019 at 4:25pm
#970331
Is it possible to pound too hard
On this rented podium?
Can't take my words back.
I have hammer and nails
And biceps that would sweat
For the women who swoon
And jealous men who don't dare
Compare to compete
With the likes of me because
The game is fixed
And I must go home
Now that the rant pales
Without proper amplification

Words won't hit their mark
In your arena. Though
I see the fixed eye --
The sidelong stare and
Maybe there is hope
I'll get out of here
If I ever find a bigger arena
Someone who will tout
The likes of me.
November 23, 2019 at 3:28pm
November 23, 2019 at 3:28pm
#970326

Rocks

The balance
I swallow whole your rock
To allow me process
All I digest
Knowing I cannot fly proud with
Heavy stones
Eyeing
The roadside castoffs
Gobbled, consumed whole
Neighboring with the unwanted portions sent --
Unceremoniously departed
From half-open windows --
Treasure for fowl like me
But, why
Castigate a lonely soul
A kin
Who would clean up your trash
After ingesting stone ruffage to save me
From the likes of yourself?
November 20, 2019 at 8:39am
November 20, 2019 at 8:39am
#970092

because i don’t know It yet

You won’t even let me talk
Directly to you
Won’t listen or approve
Can I get an aside
As if
To whisper in your guarded ear, describe
What I see, experience
To make you feel...something?
But in code? Okay,
Use an allegory, metaphors
Personify and disconnect?
From this realm I’ve been running from?
And look back at it like...
Massive, furred forearms flailing
As bared teeth gnash
So close a nose can taste it’s breath?
Show you...fear
That this process is making me realize
Stuff
For you that removed
Ambition, hope...
Forget cliche dreams that left
Before the first gray whisker
That you pointed out, I might add.
I’ve long given up doing dishes
Cleaning the John, running a vacuum
Let’s not forget clotted gutters
Where a once useful ladder could go —
The manly things to do before
Snow, ice and forgotten leaves could remind
Another forgetful season closes
Before we can snuggle under the sheets

I’m in my bed before or after
You arrive, you who nods off in seconds
That I tiptoe around
As I imagine growing shapes on the walls
— that I could, that I would
(Not that I should)
Describe for you with waning imagination

I used to like a cold bed
Still share it
For how long?

It was either this or an ode to attending to a fungal toe...nail?
November 17, 2019 at 10:18am
November 17, 2019 at 10:18am
#969903
With all good writing, there are many things we would rather not say but leave to the reader's imagination. Poetry is like interpretive dance. How does it make you feel, make you imagine? Good, bad, we move on from it. Do we go back to it, begs the poet? To quantify words takes skill or simple experience. The more we read and write, the process cultivates those keen eyes for the right text.

I'm not a master of writing. I obsess with words, the language, especially since 2006. Readers forced me to wrestle with myself, my words, get to the point. So, here it is. My attempt at a poem with challenge to readers to see if we are on the same page. An attempt to show this community what is part Me and part you...what I've learned here should reflect strongly in what I display in ALL MY WRITING:

The poem:
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This item number is not valid.
#2203574 by Not Available.


Interpretation:
(What you should know -- I have all kinds of avenues to chase down when I start something. Just the title alone made me think of all the directions I wanted to take. I had a feeling in my gut, because my motor was revving. When I feel good and want to express, I trust wherever this thing is going. I'm part navigator, driver and the person in the back seat experiencing the ride. Each voice in my head uses experience to help us get there.)

I like the comments people shared. It even got scholarly. Rather than response to reviews, I waited for the responses, the second look-sees. Now I reveal -- I can make Interpretation succinct.

Life is a fast ride. Be prepared. It will give you feelings of false hope. 'Eyes that gleam'...we see possibilities. Ghosts are self-doubt and haunting reminders of what we could have been...hence dull eyes, numbing ourselves to avoid regret.

'Over all shoulders' is the past, history and indicates 'since the beginning of time' like our forefathers who came over whatever ocean with a dream but failed: 'drown on dry land'...irony. But: 'backs to the future' ...we ignore the past. We are stubborn. We insulate, winter ourselves (so to speak). 'Silver dreams' ...someone else's visions to get us through these hard times (movies, streaming services *Laugh*). 'Dreamt for us'...selling us fantasies we could not acquire ourselves.

The last stanza is about what we leave behind. It's the saddest. We are dying. Our planet, in fact. Autumn is no longer about promise of renewal, but marking time. All the tomorrows forgotten: end of time. And, we (more notably, this author) dread rather than live like we are dying -- so, it is individualist and globalist in each sense.

Side 2:
(I had this written out by hand after reading last review of Through Your Hair. Flipping over note now.)

We can be the biggest obstacles to our own fate if we are not equipped to be a part of this world (so much of that statement applies to my foray in the Internet realms). And, even if we did play our cards right, is it satisfying to play systematically, rather than just live and experience and let all the joys and sorrows move through us without keeping score?

Okay, last statement might not be a defense of poem. I'll reread 'Through Your Hair' one more time...BRB...

Oh, yeah. I had a crib note stuck into there under HIDE:
"Essentially, the history of the world and human kind's persistence in it. Our purpose is to live, die and give to future generations. Circle of life stuff. But, what we truly impose on earth is only death. It questions our purpose, spreading from continent to continent and then the world succumbs to our ultimate overpopulation. So, death. Imagery implies most. I just forgot all elements of what I meant as I wrote like what over our shoulders meant other than leaving behind other worlds, lives, turning our back on history while forging ahead, crossing Atlantic to America."

Maybe, more global than individual? It is possible to not be the master of what you write? Maybe, there is some truth to these muses beyond a whimsical nature that overtakes the soul of a writer. Hey, don't blame me! *points at winged muses*

I've come to appreciate your input of my writing. I owe a lot of my growth with poetry here to your input.

Signed,

ly
November 17, 2019 at 9:48am
November 17, 2019 at 9:48am
#969901

Sometimes, I want to give away (to the potential reader) too much. But you have to sing that song in your heart, no matter how awkward. Some might like it, others might hate it. Mostly, it's no response and you move on -- to another beat, the next rhythm that spins your heart to dance...chance it.
Sometimes, its serendipity that reminds us our language can be decoded. We don't want to tell too much because the intensity of what you feel lies hidden in the words you chose. I responded to this note I happened upon in newsfeed:

"Note: Maybe the trees will take us for granted. Maybe t..."

Maybe the trees will take us for granted. Maybe they already have. Maybe we will grow up to do the same, you and I. Or maybe we will dive into the lake, together, and never come up. Maybe the summer will forget our names. Maybe it already has. Maybe we will lose ourselves in the fall and do the same, you and I. Or maybe we will splinter across the canyon, together, and become a fine dust. I already blame the Staghorn Cholla. I already blame the wild Vesper Sparrows. The saints of Phoenix have come here calling for us again. I am radiant with things I will never understand, and you, you are charged with the same. We are always, and always the same, you and I. We are drawing now nearer to the edge of the forest. Maybe the wolves will forget what they have seen here. Or maybe they will use it against us. Maybe we will return with our weapons, together, and do the same, you and I. Maybe we will become the bullets that splinter apart their bones in the names of men. WE WILL REMOVE THE ONCE SHARP TEETH, YOU AND I, AND LEAVE OUR FORMER NAMES AS VESTIGES IN THEIR PLACE.

Clouds, was what I imagined -- clouds personified. It doesn't have to be what the poet intended when you read. What did you see or feel when you invested your mind in consuming the poet's offering? His experience shared becomes the experience others may have had or Unknowingly processing. Passion-driven writing, no matter how controversial, doesn't feel wrong because you are not telling people what to feel.

Again, they will like it, hate it or leave it. Just have to be true to yourself. We are shaped by those interactions, but the passion/message will survive and eventually find those faces that know your true heart. Your growth comes from preserverence. You learn as you teach along the way.

"Moon In October 🌕
November 16, 2019 at 3:56pm
November 16, 2019 at 3:56pm
#969849

Hold on to your hats or Stetsons...

Only villains monologue (too long)
before they're caught,
destroyed by they're own vanity --
fiction, cliche
devices to accentuate the 'good'
(otherwise boring characters)
before we, the ignorant masses
who eventually get trapped
in this (our) shared reality,
realize
the true deceptive:
white and black are not
primary colors.


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