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I had a lover's quarrel with the world - Robert Frost

         |
I'm sorry you got caught in the middle. - me


This poet’s words collect, arrange on a kaleidoscope spectrum. The experience of discovery through writing is the truest reward that has allowed me to grow and learn who/what I am — what other people get naturally, immediately, while I stomp around in it.

Been blessed, but pushing it — envelope, world and all inhabitants away. Push buttons, find boundaries to trip traps. No clue why cat curiosity, living in your dark. (Bored, perhaps?)

Now and then, push dirt out of this hole; someone/thing/entity might envision me how I need to be viewed (if I knew what that was). Cryptic, yes. Try living in my dark, find comfort amid strange, virtual, wonderful walls that tower above, tempt me to scale.

Been more than I could imagine or expect here. But, achievements aren’t going on a LinkedIn wall *Think*. I dig deeper than I should, often without forethought. Aimless words, brave or veiled cowardice, flinchingly flung, inadvertently hit targets? Get a ‘back off’ shoulder shot when asking your motivations here. Not fair?

No prize to eye; not incentivized. Dealt the worst two cards before the flop, do best with what’s in hand.



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Your poetic muse is on fire! *Fire* Some great emotion, well-balance(d), lovely lyrical qualities -- even the ones that were written out of sadness or anger came through in a clever cadence…It's obvious you've put a lot of work into each entry and the totality of the blog has eye appeal. *Cool*

 
Published four times with one a literary journal, including… *PointRight*   "The Tender Core (Sedona)
I don’t submit because it’s too much work. Truly alone, know no one cares to show they believe/support me. Lip service feeds delusion. I’ve seen a lot of smoldering and snow. Try not be cynical, work hard at openness and consideration — work, sooo…gut thing.

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Love my process constructing and sharing visions in words collected (no small task considering personal and physical limitations, see below).


August 28, 2006 this blog opened

BOOK
SuperNova Afterglow: End Of Days  (18+)
All that remains: here in my afterlife as a 'mainstream' blogger, with what little I know.
#1300042 by Brian K Compton


No specific aim going forward (2014)

 
What I used to say: 'Maybe, I just don't get it. Watch me fumble with my version of reality, expose ignorance as truth. You don't have to get me, either. But, wish someone would explain me to myself.' Now I say: *Cool* *FacePalm* Now: I was such a whore.
 


*Laugh*This is old….
What? Oh, this? A rhetorical, self-motivational speech I'm working on.
Don't just read the parts to construct your theory, as if to confirm (construed out of context) your opinion, mentally-stunted Neanderthal. Therapist wants me to be less negative toward myself. I see it as attacking, rather than being defensive. Fear I will chomp too many bullets unintentionally sent toward the unsuspecting.
If you can be triggered for stupid reasons, then I?
…just looked like me rolling around on the floor with myself.*RollEyes*
             



What Was NEW

Who am I, you ask? My mirror knows that question, repeated daily.

Just trying to create a little buzz, not boost my ego.

#amwriting #poetry #blog #contest #freeverse #award #bestpoetry #freyaridings #lyrics #music #video #YouTube

Can you believe it took this long for someone to put a quarter in me and push the button GET ANGRY?
 

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July 8, 2020 at 7:44am
July 8, 2020 at 7:44am
#987546
Another Hopeful Sunrise

Hazel eyes peer over this dark horizon,
         glow like
morning arriving; rising high on
moon-disturbed crests curling that
         fall away,
shimmer-intensify, blind my silence.

Light bends back, splits open the sky --
         blue hurtling over
my lonely vision,
         invisibly escaping with
last dust of night.

Circumpolar giants roam -- mere glints hurl
         soft white form like
new tides bright before
I walk from this retreating shade,
         back to bed to dream
another hopeful sunrise.

7.8.20

Quiet in these parts...
July 7, 2020 at 8:02am
July 7, 2020 at 8:02am
#987450
White Blossoms

Purity of Truth

Pure
white radiance/
your tender firm
juts and spurs collect
the amorous yellow and black/
innocence lost seasons ago/
essence beckoning youth/
foolish now/
return

Lost
cherry visions/
glowing harvest hung/
anchor steadfast like prizes
at carnival/ beg aimless capture/
puerile hearts fling arrows
greedy with glee/
true misses/
pure

Blossoms
ignored/ driving
past trees sagging
more each day than
the last/ forgotten like truth/
virtue of unskilled marksmen
drives to market
for fresh
produce


7.7.20

July 6, 2020 at 9:45am
July 6, 2020 at 9:45am
#987364
i sought divine eyes.
i divined the searching looks
angling for someone --
some one who angled for
truth within my delusion.

i caressed perfect skin --
skin caressed perfectly
by a rough, angry heart --
a rough anger heartless,
begging delusion be truth.

and then she kissed me
with willing eyes diving deep
into my jaded orbs deflecting
truth from a new reality --
i could love and throw it away --

throw away love because
i do not believe in truth --
kiss and caress roughly
like an angry heart, because
i did not divine true love.

7.6.20

Written to Creep by Radiohead


TOP 40 ALL-TIME Writing.Com AUTHOR:
Rank 36, 07/2020

BLOG: "SuperNova Afterglow: End Of Days
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2020 WDC Heart Throb Poet:
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Most Talented Author 2011:


Shadows And Light Contest (21 awards),
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Best of Rising Stars:
2018
2012
2017
2010
2009 North Star Award

July 6, 2020 at 8:18am
July 6, 2020 at 8:18am
#987357
Saw a post in newsfeed and started fishing to learn more about these lyrics:

Seventeen coal-black horses,
hitched to a rubber tied hack.
Seven girls going to the graveyard,
only six of them coming back.

Traditional Irish Folk:
The Unfortunate Rake (Lyrics)

As I was a walking down by the “Lock”
As I was walking one morning of late
Who did I spy but my own dear comrade
Wrapp'd in flannel, so hard is his fate

Had she but told me when she disordered me
Had she but told me of it at the time
I might have got salts and pills of white mercury
But now I'm cut down in the height of my prime

I boldly stepped up to him and kindly did ask him
Why he was wrapp'd in flannel so white?
My body is injured and sadly disordered
All by a young woman, my own heart's delight

My father oft told me, and of times chided me
And said my wicked ways would never do
But I never minded him, nor ever heeded him
I always kept up in my wicked ways

Get six jolly fellows to carry my coffin
And six pretty maidens to bear up my pall
And give to each of them bunches of roses
That they may not smell me as they go along

Over my coffin put handsful of lavender
Handsful of lavender on every side
Bunches of roses all over my coffin
Saying there goes a young man cut down in his prime

Muffle your drums, play your pipes merrily
Play the death march as you go along
And fire your guns right over my coffin
There goes an unfortunate lad to his home

Updated in Jazz Style:
St. James Infirmary
Louis Armstrong (1928)

I went down to the St. James Infirmary
Saw my baby there
Stretched out on a long white table
So sweet, so cold, so fair

Let her go, let her go, God bless her
Wherever she may be
She can look this wide world over
She'll never find a sweet man like me

When I die, want you to dress me in straight-lace shoes
Box-back coat and a Stetson hat
Put a twenty-dollar gold piece on my watch chain
So the boys'll know that I died standin' pat

Cab Calloway Version


AND AGAIN --

Folk Style:
St. James Infirmary
Arlo Guthrie

It was down in Old Joe's barroom
At the corner by the square
The drinks were served as usual
And the usual crowd was there

Now on my left stood Big Joe McKennedy
His eyes were bloodshot red
And as he looked at the gang around him
These were the very words he said:

"I went down to the St. James Infirmary
I saw my baby there
Stretched out on a long white table
So young, so cold, so fair"

Seventeen coal black horses
Hitched to a rubber-tired hack
Seven girls goin to the graveyard
Only six of them are coming back

Well let her go, let her go
God bless her, wherever she may be
She may search this wide world over
And never find another man like me

Oh, when I die, just bury me
In my high top Stetson hat
Place a twenty-dollar gold piece on my watch chain
To let the Lord know I died standin' pat

I want six crap shooters for pall bearers
A chorus girl to sing me a song
Place a jazz band on my hearse wagon
Just to raise hell as we roll along

Well now that you've heard my story
I'll take another shot of booze
And if anyone here should ask you
I've got the gambler's blues


And yet, I can't help thinking of:


July 6, 2020 at 7:13am
July 6, 2020 at 7:13am
#987349
Coronaviridae

He gave you bleach, and
you would dare drink?
Ingest that formula,
go maskless like a fiend
into a paper-thin night.
Your tele-evangelist,
dividing us from fake news,
misled you because
a lemming lacks true
sense of direction.

He inoculated against
the theories of science,
became superhuman to
a defiant generation
as science applied logic
to errant philosophies
while humble veterans died
from hydroxychloroquine.

On your sandy beaches
this summer getting hammered,
utter your truths again and again.
Does not easily flow like
the keg tap to and from
the native tongue of hypocrisy.

While you wait for
black screens to illuminate
your organized projectile-
animated fare, drink bleach
and shut up, or sit
on that tavern stool
spinning philosophies,
arrogant genius inept --
spread your theories
like the snowflakes,
like a dusty, thin vapor,
invisible to the unknowing
as they wheel out more
victims down dark halls,
friendless and alone,
one by one through ICU
to untimely death; or,
forever diseased, life
shortened, linger like
leaches latched to
the tender, pink lungs.

1) Some people who become ill with COVID-19 can also develop a bacterial infection as a complication. In this case, antibiotics may be recommended by a health care provider.

There is currently no licensed medication to cure COVID-19. If you have symptoms, call your health care provider or COVID-19 hotline for assistance.

2) The prolonged use of medical masks can be uncomfortable. However, it does not lead to CO2 intoxication nor oxygen deficiency. While wearing a medical mask, make sure it fits properly and that it is tight enough to allow you to breathe normally. Do not re-use a disposable mask and always change it as soon as it gets damp.

* Medical masks (also known as surgical masks) are flat or pleated; they are affixed to the head with straps or have ear loops.

3) Spraying and introducing bleach or another disinfectant into your body WILL NOT protect you against COVID-19 and can be dangerous
Do not under any circumstance spray or introduce bleach or any other disinfectant into your body. These substances can be poisonous if ingested and cause irritation and damage to your skin and eyes.

Bleach and disinfectant should be used carefully to disinfect surfaces only. Remember to keep chlorine (bleach) and other disinfectants out of reach of children.

4O Drinking methanol, ethanol or bleach DOES NOT prevent or cure COVID-19 and can be extremely dangerous
Methanol, ethanol, and bleach are poisons. Drinking them can lead to disability and death. Methanol, ethanol, and bleach are sometimes used in cleaning products to kill the virus on surfaces – however you should never drink them. They will not kill the virus in your body and they will harm your internal organs.

To protect yourself against COVID-19, disinfect objects and surfaces, especially the ones you touch regularly. You can use diluted bleach or alcohol for that. Make sure you clean your hands frequently and thoroughly and avoid touching your eyes, mouth and nose.


Donald Trump Watches TV and social media (like you) for information rather than read and respond to daily information provided by his crack staff, constantly in flux and reassignments. But, John Bolton has an axe to grind, so. Read between the lines.

https://www.who.int/emergencies/diseases/novel-coronavirus-2019/advice-for-publi...

https://www.ucsf.edu/news/2020/02/416671/how-new-coronavirus-spreads-and-progres...
July 5, 2020 at 11:41am
July 5, 2020 at 11:41am
#987285


TOP 40 ALL-TIME Writing.Com AUTHOR:
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2020 WDC Heart Throb Poet:
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Most Talented Author 2011:


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Best of Rising Stars:
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2012
2017
2010
2009 North Star Award

July 3, 2020 at 7:43am
July 3, 2020 at 7:43am
#987112
I don't want to be a pretender in your rooms --
instructed to remove shoes, and ruled how
we were supposed to play in his carpeted den.
light shining on your face, you engaged the needle
on your dad's phonograph, with its diamond tip.

fifteen, alone, after school, our games began to bend
another way. I learned to sway. you taught me moves
learned from friends at school. Love Me Tender faded
lonely and alone in a wave of record scratches, winding.
our pelvises touched on the waking shores.

a new game of tag with soft lips, your eyes
led me that way, naturally, knowing a silent rule --
tender was not love but fire aflame. tongues
repurposed dove deeper. our (e)motions, a new music.
I knew I never wanted to play any other game before
you sent me home that day, eternally away.

I still see you in your carpeted rooms, socks
cast off. I still see the your eyelids' shutter, emit
amber light -- two perfect gems honed and ready
to ply vinyl vibrations. I told you I would not be
a pretender and must live on alone -- 15, after school.

7.3.20
21 lines
not written to any prompt or for any contest, but the approval of eyes knowing

July 2, 2020 at 11:21am
July 2, 2020 at 11:21am
#987028
Heaven on earth, the earthly tulips
briefly brighten the front row, once obscured
(last summer) by two full maples that stood
guard, shaded your now full sun-soaked
home, the pre-heating oven. Blasted cool
rooms darkened, as windows in full lock down
curtain against a powerful, impervious orb.

Your shelter begs you not to look out
at those fading blooms in eternal heat.
Shred the arboretum and compost giants
of health that abutted my half grown tree,
now exposed (thanks to you), and sweat
each year in loose garment if you dare.

Your lush green, stridently layered by mow,
pities my dandelion jungle and patched earth.
Will you ever dare walk on those lush blades,
flattened under foot? When I toss a blanket
beneath my black locust in shade it affords, with
summer lemonade swirling? The only canopy
you see are wayward clouds with, hopeful, rain.

Don't kill trees for petulant flowers ever again
or reach over the border fence to trim my hedges.


7.2.20
7.3.20
How many lines was that? Screw it.

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Best of Rising Stars:
2018
2012
2017
2010
2009 North Star Winner

Just to name a few. I don't pad my Community Recognition, as everything I earn by trying to prove my worth as a writer and supporter of writers who seek self-improvement, as I do. My ego modestly accepts any privilege offered as acknowledgement of my effort to be a virtuous author foremost.

BOOK
Poetic Referendum(s) On Life  (18+)
10k views, 2x BestPoetryCollection. A nothing from nowhere cast words to a world wide wind
#1149750 by Brian K Compton


Critically unacclaimed, as I see it. I won a few battles, but not this war.

STATIC
Dear Me WINNER: Crossroads  (E)
'14 WINNER: Crumple up the past, toss it aside and begin on a new page.
#1974353 by Brian K Compton

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July 1, 2020 at 6:16am
July 1, 2020 at 6:16am
#986914
Like a leap of faith
10 stories high
from a cloudless apex
to his hot love below,
a black sea warming
with a rising sun peering --
not as high as the
lone perch two rubber-soled
shoes plied, bending
on the edge.
         From this vantage,
beauty seldom witnessed
in isolation, quiet.
         From this solemn summit
he could dive, but
no arms of forgiveness
would grasp
a melting soul vaporized.
The black would not
receive him, as the horizon
gave up its blaze.
No yellow warmth left
as the small objects
merged with the light --
mindless movements
in the emptiness below.
         The sea subsided, as
he reversed course to
a quiet stairwell door --
locked. Call for help
or proceed as planned?
No provisions to survive
the tarred-roof-oven top --
he could cry out, or
give the audience a show.


7.1.20
7.10.20 edit

Got the idea from reading someone's May contest entry that I considered reviewing. Actually, not even what their subject was about but saw something between the lines that inspired the opening scene. It took off from there.


June 29, 2020 at 8:02am
June 29, 2020 at 8:02am
#986752
Fulfilling the minimum obligations is easier
than striving to be your best when
it is deemed not good enough.
When the horizon is at a fixed distance,
you'll never reach. Rest and enjoy
the view provided to you.
Whether you man an oar boat over
that treacherous sea or sail first class
on a sleek ocean liner racing toward
a setting sun, you'll never arrive.
So, why not strive to take it all in,
then cast that gaze on the solemn ground
lingering beneath two planted feet
that one day will merge with earth.
Harvest with your eyes and feast on
the barren home of fruitless desire.

6.29.20

Delusion is free to consume, if you still want to dream awhile more.

Sizing people up and counting the number of bullets I need, a completely analogous and unspecified statement not related.
June 29, 2020 at 7:27am
June 29, 2020 at 7:27am
#986750
Animals fed bones of appeasement
are not kindly collared as pets
whether beautifully bred but fed
as savages who will nap at your feet
would allow a pat for obedience
Dehumanized beasts under-estimated
devour the scenery, chew Pavlov's set,
capable of introspect of what is circumspect
Your slippers are fair game, if I am
your beast.

BOOK
Poetic Referendum(s) On Life  (18+)
10k views, 2x BestPoetryCollection. A nothing from nowhere cast words to a world wide wind
#1149750 by Brian K Compton


6.29.20
I'll develop this further. It's obvious, but could use a fuller appreciation of metaphor and theme.
June 28, 2020 at 8:40am
June 28, 2020 at 8:40am
#986691
Lavender Buttons

The Clematis exhaled
and darling Buttons popped...

To the mulch
lavender kisses fall --
disassembled, fragmented --
In the acidic red bath --
a clutter atop
a barrier to green blades
defiantly piercing
anything, anywhere.

Gathered, the silk ears
elegantly crowd jagged crystal
purposed after a life
hidden from dust
in a glass amphitheatre --
in the corner hutch --
a haven similar
to your mother,
soon a withering stock.

She returns next spring
with your siblings
too precious to waste
on sober, gray eyes.
If only I could inhale
your bounty afresh,
sew my Buttons
back on, so you could
eventually meet.
Shrink in brilliance,
reposed in glass bed,
knowing, I loved you.

6.26.20
6.28.20

31 lines, freeverse
June 24, 2020 at 9:52am
June 24, 2020 at 9:52am
#986416
I am not the source of sunshine.
I could soak in rays wherever spread --
but in my orbit, no position.

Spun on axis, speeding light years away
from the center of this space shared,
I see yellow warmth bathing deserving others,
overfed beyond spacious purgatory --
a satellite told, behave like us,
or not be counted in our system.

I cast my eyes ahead to the lonely arc
gaping, furthered toward deepest dark,
when I’m fed the most beautiful view

away from you. In my lonely view — sated.
Sparkling future infinitely lays now before me,
free floating from magnetism that could never
compel me to drink your radiation like sunlight.


6.24.20
sunlight = padded community recognition
BOOK
Poetic Referendum(s) On Life  (18+)
10k views, 2x BestPoetryCollection. A nothing from nowhere cast words to a world wide wind
#1149750 by Brian K Compton


4.0 is the new hate rate. Apply it to your warm words wherever you go.
I have been kind to not review your celebrated words, ancillary star.
June 23, 2020 at 7:58am
June 23, 2020 at 7:58am
#986335
What Will I Type?

Sober after my first cup I stare at a wood, oval top
perfect for plates, evenly spaced, decorated with
folded napkins of whatever design and the purposed forks,
ornate spoons married at their side, hidden from
the seldom-used but dutiful butterknife, erect at attendance.
Perfect for that,
but what I see are a collection of folded statements and letters
with windows empty, mingling with scribbles and scratchings
on errant notes, a purposed power cord attached to an iPhone
next to an empty, stained white cup. The reading glasses
are not to be found.
So, I type on this illuminated distraction wide with characters
and connected despair.
What will I type tomorrow?



BOOK
Poetic Referendum(s) On Life  (18+)
10k views, 2x BestPoetryCollection. A nothing from nowhere cast words to a world wide wind
#1149750 by Brian K Compton


I recently read other noteworthy poets I've had the pleasure of connecting with (in the real world) and reminded I want passion in my writing, not just prose broken into lines to punctuate colorfully depicted anecdotes from life. I want more out writing than a flat vignette that passes for poetry; but, a deep, subdural connection to ignorant, hidden regions of a flailing anatomy full of uncompromising chemicals bathing its psyche. Gah! I hate where that last sentence went...but, I'm not changing it. And, I'm not apologizing. Suck it, Neitzsche!

“Man’s misfortune was that he was once a child.” *Pthb*
June 20, 2020 at 12:30pm
June 20, 2020 at 12:30pm
#986073
When the dark tide turns --
tumult from the deep disturbed
Black spoil surfaces
where the moon
intensely casts luminosity,
scans these lonely beaches
-- amid --
tossed driftwood, weed entangled

combers scour, overlook
agates like me --
pearls begging capture
on your stroll

but, I'm a rough gem
soon clutched by a child,
feebly hurled
toward a pale sky --
cast into the rolling,
deep blue, swallowed
another century or two of
drowning, yearning

lunar might
magnetically,
howeverly, expel me
during some dark purge --
a former truant
of your shores.

6.20.20
6.29.20 edit

Brian, why so many dashes?
and the introduction of 'howeverly'. set to learn.

June 20, 2020 at 5:16am
June 20, 2020 at 5:16am
#986050
My love for you has to be
stronger
than your doubt for us.
Little moments I let slip away
you no longer clutch.

I thought you had the string.
Our beautiful craft could
fly away.

Disparaged on this ground
with two who won't agree
how to lift --
makes me yearn
to be weightless again.

That stronghold in my heart
firms
in our waning hours --
holding you like a kite,
remembering how beautiful
our flight.

We soared before.

In the many hours captured,
escaping
like helium I breathe in --
with lasting, ever-expanding
lungs, comes belief

I can refill you
with our love.

6.20.20




BOOK
Poetic Referendum(s) On Life  (18+)
10k views, 2x BestPoetryCollection. A nothing from nowhere cast words to a world wide wind
#1149750 by Brian K Compton
June 14, 2020 at 11:10am
June 14, 2020 at 11:10am
#985626
Is there room in your world
for someone awkward
in and out stumbling through
your heart's threshold?
without humility, but
wants to craft the words
he believes
that you will realize --
will summit --
truth we both seek?

Did you disengage
before my rambling words,
this solemn confession,
could tumble into that algorithm --
and you say,
not how it works.
Love isn't fumbling
to unlock a combination, but
serendipity --
not a conceptual construct
but a beating
between two
lingering beneath the flesh
that grows truer
until synchronized.

Each advance
on the journey, I chose
magnet to your steel,
hopeful with your back turned
we'll connect.
There's never any doubt
in a weather-worn,
rust-resistant,
orange-dust heart

we'll always be polarized.


6.14.20
6.19.20

after some time to consider indifference
June 14, 2020 at 11:07am
June 14, 2020 at 11:07am
#985625
‪In the church of broken hearts‬,
‪          soul-crushing amid them‬ --
‪          aisle-divided, humbled souls‬
‪cast eyes to directed idols‬,
‪daily relive shame‬:
‪          self-persecuting, yearning divinity‬,
         ‪bereft‬
‪of some forgiveness, but infer‬ --
‪think about what we have NOT done‬
‪to serve better‬.

‪My alms won’t salve everything‬.

You wear the white frock,
rise above the sanctuary
         in the nave instruct the naïve
sheltering eyes from distorted rays
oozing through stained, bubbled glass.

In this warm-scene-amphitheater,
we must forgive ourselves before you
         for impure thoughts and ignorance,
because we have not cracked
ancient code reprinted in your bibles,
         translated from dead words
to entreat me, them -- to inform confusion
we are never worthy, lost
without whatever baptismal water
you can spare on dry skin.

When I came through your pearly
barricade, I needed someone to hold --
         and still I seek, yearn to believe
there is some sanctity left for this
grubby, worthless one, labeled.

Your eyes are not what I need.

6.14.20
6.29.20 edited

33 lines, since you have not enough fingers and toes
June 12, 2020 at 4:34pm
June 12, 2020 at 4:34pm
#985540
My second poem in two years will be published this summer in Bramble, a Wisconsin Fellowship of Poets quarterly publication.

"the light show was created thanks to Stormy's Poetry Newsletter contest, based on her prompts. (link pending)

Another poem "Invalid Item was previously chosen by different editors at the same literary magazine.

I've been rejected three or more times since 2018ish. I don't submit much.

BOOK
Poetic Referendum(s) On Life  (18+)
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#1149750 by Brian K Compton


June 2, 2020 at 10:45am
June 2, 2020 at 10:45am
#984841
Evaporation Point

Smashing eggshell into
the side of a red, Teflon pan
blazing -- the flat, iron land
not yet hot enough.
Skull imploding, already dead
when finally delivered
to evaporation point,
during our nuclear winter.
My empty remains discarded,
unborn I ride inside
man-made, coated steel.
Slither and fry, yellow
at the core, a baby
who never arrived --
just one of 12 crated at factory,
carried home from that morgue
called the grocery store.


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