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It’s time to begin a new life working with Princess Twilight in Ponyville

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Chapter #6

Crude Carbonation

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Though a little dizzy, you remain seated, Looking straight at the mare, who seems genuinely surprised.

“Okay, Okay... guess you got a little more in ya than I expected. I ain’t giving up that easy, though. Just gotta find something else to beat you at!”

She pauses, and you hear a quiet bubbling traveling up her throat, exploding into a loud, uncouth belch.

She giggles. “Well, Excuse me!” And then pauses. “Hold on.. I got it. A burp off.”

The crowd of ponies circling the table all murmur. This mare certainly brings to question the idea of being ‘ladylike’.

“Sure.” You reply, not exactly sure you have a chance but also feeling bubbles brew up in your stomach - if you were going to be trumped by a mare, at least you would be trying your best.

“Well, it’s your turn!” She flashes a sly grin towards you, arm rested idly on the table as if this is merely second nature to her - and based on her rowdy, uncouth personality, you were starting to think it is.

It wasn’t hard to let out the first burp, freeing some of the bubbles trapped down inside you, resulting in a decent belch that seems to match the mare’s.

She snickers. “That all you got?” Before her chest puffs out, as do her cheeks, and she works another cacophonous eructation up and out, forcing it as hard as she can and making it blare out harshly with a loud

HUUUUUUUUURRRRP

You start to sweat, feeling as if this is a round you really can’t win. It wasn’t like it really mattered - you should really be off renting a room for the night - but somehow you felt like losing to this pony would be shameful with the many spectators eyeing up your every move.

“Well?” She pulls you out of your train of thought.
“Gonna follow up or just take the easy way out and let me win?”

No - you couldn’t. Not this far in. You push, trying to bring some bubbles up, and match her belch even slightly.
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