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The orb is left for a teen girl to find. It gives her powers to read and modify the minds.
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Chapter #3

Zachary your ex-boyfriend

    by: DrZaaijer Author IconMail Icon
You had been in the school making several changes to lots of the students you encountered. This power shown in your face. You were confident and fearless and a little bit ruthless and all of that showed up in your expression. This was a turn-on for your ex-boyfriend Zachary. He didn't know what you had been doing of course but he recognized your change in attitude and he decided that he should give you another shot.

"Hey Lau, how is it going?" he said trying to feel you out to see if you were still sore. He thought that you had no reason to be sore since it was you who forced the breakup.

Seeing no reason to lie you told him, "I am feeling great!"

"Well you look great too."

"Thank you."

"I was wondering if you would want to go out Friday?"

You were incensed. You thought what gall this man had. He broke up with you. He said all those bad things. Now he wanted to pick up with you as if nothing had happened. You thought he is probably just thinking with his dick. You thought that he wasn't worthy of dating anyone again. So you looked into his mind and made him freeze in place. No one could tell that he was immobilized but you knew. He couldn't move and he couldn't say anything. He realized immediately but there wasn't any outward sign of his panic.

You spoke to him in a quiet voice. You could have spoke right to his brain but you wanted to use the words instead. "You want to go out with me??? After what you have done? What gall you have. I wouldn't go out with you if you were the last man on Earth. I am going to spare all other women that insult too. But don't worry you won't be lonely, you won't want to go out with any one ever again. I'm not that cruel so when I release you your personality will change to the same as your seven-year old sister, Pamela's. You will think happy little girl thoughts and want to do little girl things. You will think that girls are fun to play with and that's all. You will also think that boys are stupid but that can't be helped. You'll want to play with dolls and crayons and all the things that Pamela likes. I'm not going to diminish your intellect so you can remain a student here, but I don't know how you will fit in. ALL I KNOW IS THAT NO WOMAN WILL HEAR YOUR PICK-UP LINES AGAIN."

Then you walked away. It was true, Zachary's personality did change to that of a seven-year old girl. He didn't remember anything you said. He simply walked to his next class like any other seven-year old would. Unlike every other normal seven-year old, his personality would never mature. He would always have the personality of a little girl.

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