1) I liked the previous chapter with Zachary, but I think it could have happened another way too. So if you read this chapter it is assumed that the last chapter right above this chapter didn't happen thus the beginning will be the same In this chapter, Zachary's sister is older than him (or he has two sisters, doesn't matter.)
2) I have written almost 150 chapters in a month and a half or so and haven't gotten any feedback or other people adding to the story (except for wndlizzie chapters) This is quite disheartening. If someone doesn't say something or write soon, I'm afraid I'll run out of ideas. You got to help me or there will be nothing. I know I have some loyal readers...you know who you are because I don't. Get me some feedback or ideas or something. Stuff like your doing great keep on it nice but no way really helpful please something more constructive. Of course I haven't even got the you are doing great thing either.
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You had been in the school making several changes to lots of the students you encountered. This power shown in your face. You were confident and fearless and a little bit ruthless and all of that showed up in your expression. This was a turn-on for your ex-boyfriend Zachary. He didn't know what you had been doing of course but he recognized your change in attitude and he decided that he should give you another shot.
"Hey Lau, how is it going?" he said trying to feel you out to see if you were still sore. He thought that you had no reason to be sore since it was you who forced the breakup.
Seeing no reason to lie you told him, "I am feeling great!"
"Well you look great too."
"Thank you."
"I was wondering if you would want to go out Friday?"
You were incensed. You thought what gall this man had. He broke up with you. He said all those bad things. Now he wanted to pick up with you as if nothing had happened. You thought he is probably just thinking with his dick. You thought that he wasn't worthy of dating anyone again. So you looked into his mind and made him freeze in place. No one could tell that he was immobilized but you knew. He couldn't move and he couldn't say anything. He realized immediately but there wasn't any outward sign of his panic.
Zachary knew the power you had. You had told his mind and since he was paralyzed there was no doubting the power you had. You allowed him to speak.
"Please don't. Stop don't do anything to me."
"Why shouldn't I? You know what I can do. I could make you think you are a dog. I could tell your mom to keep you in the backyard."
"If you leave me alone, I'll, I'll leave. You won't ever see me again."
"If you were a dog in the back yard I wouldn't see you."
"I'll give you whatever you want. I can pay you."
"You'll do that if I want you to anyway. I'll just put it in your head and you'll do it."
This perplexed Zachary. You were right, you could get him to do anything you wanted. But he persisted. "Don't change me and I'll do anything you want."
Zachary really didn't have any bargaining chips. "You'll do anything I ask?"
"Yes anything. I'll line up people for you to change. You tell me what you want and I'll get them. People like me here, I can get anyone."
"I can do that myself. But I am intrigued. What would you do for me?"
"Anything you ask." You thought a while. Making someone do anything without you making them could be fun.
"Anything?" you inquired elongating the word.
"Yes, anything you want."
"OK, I want you to tell your sister, Pamela that you have always wanted to be a girl like her." Pamela is Zachary's older sister. She is eighteen years old. Continuing, "Then I want you to get her to lend you her clothes and come to my house wearing your sister's borrowed clothing. Make sure you are wearing a dress with hose and shoes with heels with the proper lingerie to go with it. See if you can get your sister to help you put on some makeup too." Zachary looked horrified. "Oh, yes when you come to my house you had better have talked to your sister and not just sneak out of the house wearing girl's clothes. I can read your mind I'll know if you are trying to trick me.
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In this chapter, Zachary's sister is older than him (or he has two sisters, doesn't matter.)
