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The orb is left for a teen girl to find. It gives her powers to read and modify the minds.

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Chapter #4

Bathtime for Doug

    by: DrZaaijer Author IconMail Icon
Doug and Gloria played all day, but soon it was time to go. Doug had been having so much fun with Gloria she liked to do so many things that he liked to do. She was much more fun than his normal friends who like to watch sports or see dumb movies. He didn't like those things anymore.

After Andrea and Gloria left, Doug played by himself for a while and then decided to watch TV. The Carebears were on and Gloria had told him she liked that show. Doug wanted to see if it was as good as she said and she was right. Soon everyone was called to dinner. The meal was steak with a baked potato and corn. Ellen had cut Doug's steak for him, but other than that it was a normal meal.

After dinner, Doug decided he wanted to take a shower. Ellen noticed and entered the bathroom after he did. She suggested that Doug take a bath instead of a shower and that she would bathe him. Doug wanted to do it himself, but Ellen wouldn't hear of such a thing. To Ellen, Doug was too young to be taking a bath all by himself.

Ellen put bubble bath into the tub with Doug and then she got out a washcloth and started to clean him up. You were outside the bathroom and although you couldn't see what was happening you could see inside Ellen's mind and knew what she was doing. Then you got an idea and placed it into Ellen's mind.

Ellen washed Doug's hair with her own fruity smelling shampoo and conditioner. His hair now smelled like apple blossoms or so the label said.

"Stand up," Ellen told Doug.

Doug having no choice but to mind Ellen did as he was told.

"Put your foot here," Ellen said pointing to the edge of the tub. When Doug did as was told Ellen lathered up Doug's leg and then taking a lady razor shaved the hair off it. Then she did it with the other leg. Finally she trimmed Doug's pubic hair and washed his genitals with "Summer's Eve Bath and Shower Gel" When Doug was all smooth and clean, Ellen told him to get out, then she wrapped him into a big fluffy towel. She used the razor that she shaved Doug's legs to shave his face too. Then she looked through the cabinet and found a sanitary napkin, pulled off the backing and put it into Doug's briefs. "Remember dear," she told him, "you have to keep one of these in your 'panties' until I tell you you don't have to anymore." Doug couldn't help but to comply again.

All of these instructions were put into Ellen's head by you. You didn't need to see her directly, but you were close enough to read her mind and give her instructions. This is why your powers were better than hypnosis you didn't even need to be in the same room to make people do what you wanted. You smiled to yourself.

You have the following choices:

1. Bedtime for Doug

2. Back to normal...sort of

3. Reader's choice

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