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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Adult · #1947262

A story about a notebook which changes reality whenever you write "What if..."

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Chapter #7

Susan writes something to mess with you

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What if Francesca was a rude and fat disgusting slob who would always hit on / perv on Dan whenever she was able. What If Dan had to obey all commands given by Francesca so long as they weren't sexual. Dan. There that would teach him some respect Susan thought deviously as she left her former brother to her fate.

"Francesca!", you heard your former body call out for him though the voice seemed a little bit muffled. You then went up to your former room the find that your old body had put on at least 100 pounds extra and was dressed in a tank top with stains all over it. "Clean up this mess", he demands pointing to a pile of crumbs on the floor.

You want to yell at him but you have no choice to comply with the orders, so you return with a dust pan and broom, you bend over and start to sweep up the mess, giving Francesca a perfect view of your rack. You feel violated by the action but don't blame him as you would do the same in your position but he takes it a step to far when he slaps you on the ass. "Ow", is all you can manage to say in a high pitch voice, though you want to do more and you will once you get a hold of that note book.

"Francesca", your former body then demands your attention once again before ordering you to....

You have the following choices:

1. Give me a foot massage

*Pen*
2. Strip down to your underwear

3. Something else

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