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A story about a notebook which changes reality whenever you write "What if..."

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Chapter #8

Give me a foot massage

    by: Cardio Author IconMail Icon
"Francesca, my feet hurt after all the hard work I've done today, give them a nice long rub. And use the good oils in mom and dad's room." Your former body seemingly running on journal powered auto pilot took his socks off and put his disgusting looking bare feet up to your nose. If any other person in any other situation had done this to you, you would have slapped the foot aside and told them to screw themselves. But what Susan wrote in the journal prevented that and all you could find yourself saying through gritted teeth was, "Yes sir."

You did as you were told and grabbed the oils and returned to find that your magically fat and disgusting body was now stripped down to his boxers. "Oh and Francesca, once you're done with my feet, I think the rest of my body could do with a once over." Again all you could do was smile and say, "Yes sir," as you put the oils on his body and rubbed away. You felt chills down your spine as the body you were rubbing kept letting out satisfied grunts and groans. But you managed to get through it. After finishing the job without somehow throwing up you try to sneak away to your new room as the live in maid, when 'Dan' said, "Before you turn in for the night, I need you to finish my homework, it's on the table. Make sure you get it done right."

You cursed him under your breath once you were out of earshot and went straight to work on it. It was nearly midnight before you were finished answering questions and researching and writing essays. You stumble into your room and curse your situation. You couldn't believe your sister had made you the family maid for who knows how long. You said as you stripped down to get ready for bed. And as you catch a glimps of yourself in the mirror you blush and say to yourself with a mischievous grin on your face, "Well...maybe it won't be all bad."
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This was pretty much the pattern for the next week. You'd spend the day cleaning and taking care of the house, and when 'Dancesca' got home you'd have to listen to your old body's every stupid whim including doing all of his homework. You'd sit at the table doing work you thought about how horrible your life was right now, but then you'd finish up and wash all of your problems away with a nice relaxing shower that was very much the highlight of your day that for a few minutes actually made you glad Susan had put you in this situation. After you got out of the shower this time you heard the family limo pulling into the driveway. Instinctual you put back on your uniform and rushed to greet the family when they entered as you hoped to yourself that Susan would turn you back to normal sooner rather than later. You opened the door and saw that it was...

You have the following choices:

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1. Just your parents, Susan was still in Europe

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2. Your sister with notebook in hand

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