Chapter #6The Goth Bar by: Unknown Noreen was entering a strange building that looked like it was entirely made out of stained glass and yet it didn't look like a church since the interior from what you could see on the inside was decorated with red spots on the walls, floor and ceiling that resembled bloodstains. Then you see the sign on the top of the establishment and from the look of it, it read "The Bloody Mona". Noreen must've been entering a goth bar.
Inside of the bar there was heavy metal music blaring that forced you to cover your ears in pain. From all around, the bar seemed to be filled with monsters dressed in gothic and even emo attire. Mostly there were BBW goth girls that looked like they were built just like Noreen. There was even a heavy metal-esque stage made out of plastic skulls that had an obese golden furred were jaguar girl dressed in blood red leather doing some kind of exotic dance as all male monsters in the house were staring at her monstrous booty. You even get a slight nosebleed yourself.
You see Noreen walking her way towards the counter and from your position in Noreen's cleavage, the barkeeper was actually a male monster. From the looks of it, he was a skull faced and horned ghost of some sort wearing a red chain-covered cloak that obscured the rest of his body and appeared to have his face frozen in a screaming motion. "Afternoon, Shego," says the ghost bartender in an echoing voice. "What can I interest you in today." "Black coffee, please." Replies Noreen. The ghost nods her head as Noreen takes a seat down on two bar stools that make a shrieking noise from her massive weight. Then Noreen reaches into her purse to take out one of her library books.
"Only you would bring a book to a bar." Said a voice behind Noreen. Then you hear the sound of more metal because two monsters, from the sounds of it, as gigantic and heavy as Noreen, sat to the sides of the rhino giantess. To the right was a greenish cyan monster girl who resembled an amphibious elephant with tusks, gills and webbed hands. She was a type of sea cryptid called a trunk and had blonde hair in spiked big tails with greenish black makeup and a dark green trench coat like dress. To Noreen's left was a behemoth girl, a monster resembling a very thick skinned giant hippopotamus. She had tan skin, purplish red hair in an afro/mullet style and a tight black leather jacket and skirt. She also had a purple star tattoo on one of her huge hips and abnormally long and sharp fangs even if she was a hippo-based monster.
"Hi, Shego." Says the behemoth with a smile as you look in fear at her enormous teeth. "Hey Dusk," says Shego to the behemoth girl right before turning to the trunko girl. "Hi Morose. Thought I'd see you here. Good afternoon." Morose, the trunko, just lets out a scoff and sips beer through her elephantine nose. "If you like good afternoons. Oooh, is that the Indigo Emperor? Mind if I take a look when you're done." "No," says Noreen. "But if I were you, Morose, I'd double check your underwear drawer for your library card." Dusk lets out a laugh. "Oh please," says the behemoth woman. "My folks set me up on a blind date with a human boy and it took him three days to get out of my underwear drawer. That's what they get for daring to ride the pachyderm express." Morose lets out a snicker and Noreen gives a slight smile.
"That reminds me, Honey," says Dusk. "When are you going to get a BF and get old lady Susan off your back." "Don't get me started on that airhead, Dusk," says Noreen. "She's in a rush to find some meathead to put a baby in my belly. It's tiresome." From your spot in Noreen's cleavage, you overhear the conversation and it would seem Noreen isn't getting along well with her mom. "Yeah," says Morose as she sprays beer into her mouth with her trunk and the bartender hands Noreen her coffee. "Like you could be a mom, Shego. I mean, have you looked at us? We barely look like we're out of high school. BTW, there's a concert in the park tomorrow. Our fave band has finally hit Scream Town." Noreen's ears twitch and you see that she's suddenly very interested. "You mean the Astounding Ethereals? I am so there." Dusk lets out a scoff. "I don't know about you, but I'm gonna be building a band that will make those rockers sound like a church choir. You're welcome to join."
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