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You are a teenager and looked forward to life when you are killed. What's a spirit to do?

This choice: Visit the ER.  •  Go Back...
Chapter #6

Visit the ER.

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You are hesitant as you make your way to the ER. The Emergency Room was something you only knew of reality shows and soaps series. To be able to hang out there was something that made you afraid, worried you were going to screw up. But at the same time you knew it was the kind of place where people died too. In which case you could take over their body. So after thinking things through you decide to go for it and make your way there.

Inside the ER it was busy, really busy. A lot of people were busy; doctors were checking people their pulses, using their stethoscopes to listen for a heart beat, while nurses ran from one side of the room to the other, handling all kind of fluids and medicine. These were people with a real mission; to save others. You really didn't want to mess them up, so you tried to do your best to avoid bumping into them.

You look at the patients lying there; one man was holding onto his leg, which didn't look to be set in the right way, while an old lady was bleeding from her head. The sight made you feel sick, you almost could throw up right and there. Wasn't there anyone suited for you.

"Out of the way!" You suddenly heard a panicked voice saying. Looking back you can see a man pulling a stretcher. One of the doctors walk over to the stretcher asking what happened. "A hit and run. Some idiot hit the girl with his car and ran away. The police are looking into it.

"It's no good, I can't get a pulse." The doctor tells one of the nurses. You feel something coming from the girl. You walk over to where the girl was lying on the stretcher. The girl looked young, about your age. She seems to be of Indian descent, having long black silky hair, light brown skin tan and a gorgeous face though part of it was hidden underneath a breathing mask.

Something inside of you tells you that this girl's soul has left her body. The body is right there to take for you, but could you do it? Could you really take over someone else their life? You wake up from your thoughts when the doctor screams: "her pulse is weakening, we need to do something!"

That's right, you need to do something! You decide to....

You have the following choices:

1. take over the life of the girl.

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2. don't do anything.

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