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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Ghost · #1895450

You are a teenager and looked forward to life when you are killed. What's a spirit to do?

This choice: take over the life of the girl.  •  Go Back...
Chapter #7

take over the life of the girl.

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Unsure whether this is the right thing to do, you step forward hesitant. Your eyes focus on the girl and everything seems to go slow. The doctors running around, the nurses helping the patients. You don't see or hear anything except the girl. Standing in front of the girl you feel hesitant. Here you were, going to take over the life of this innocent girl. While you were not so innocent as you appeared to be. But those were thoughts for later.

You jump on the stretcher and then slowly let yourself lie down on the exact spot as the girl. Your first thoughts were that this turned out to be some joke, nothing happened. But before you could have any other thought you can feel the body hungering for your soul, grabbing hold you as to never let go of you. You wondered whether this was the right decision to make. You however were far away, not being able to see how the doctors were relieved as to find out your host body got a pulse again. The people in the ER are relieved for one second, before they turn their thoughts to the other patients being brought in. You were quickly moved away to a private room to recover.

When you wake up again you feel awful. It was like someone hit you with a truck. Your body is aching with pain. Though you can feel the effects of the painkillers trying to subside the pain. It's not much of use. Looking around you can see you're in a hospital room. An unfamiliar woman sits in the corner. When she looks at you, she begins to shouts. She looks happy to see you, but you don't recognize her. Then all of a sudden....
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1. you remember who she is.

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2. you pass out again.

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