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You shrink, and a girl who "just wants to help" accidentally makes your life hell.
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Chapter #4

It's In the Bag

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You stand there for a few moments, unable to decide which option to take, none of them being very pleasant thoughts. He sighs as he decides to try and get her attention, noticing a very smudged/streaked stenciling of her name, Natalie, on the side of her horrible smelling bag. Unfortunately her little breather is apparently over, and she gets up just as you are getting to the bag. In a panic, especially since you can hardly breathe from the stench, you have no choice but to jump and grab onto the bag as she lifts it up.

You are barely able to hold onto the opening as the clothing that was hanging out washes over you, smothering your face with soiled cloth and sweat. About to fall to what you assume would be your death, you are 'fortunately' saved by Natalie as she tucks in the clothes with you and zips up the bag. If you thought the smell outside was bad before, it was absolutely atrocious now. The humidity of the bag is horrendous, topped only by the horrible smell of weeks old sweat and grime that has soon soaked you through. As the bag jostled back and forth, you're smothered in the clothes, being forced to swallow quite a bit of this girl's sweat.

You pray to whatever god is up there that this won't last long and fortunately it isn't too long before the bag is slammed on the floor of Natalie's room. You wait impatiently for your chance to get out...

1. You hear who you assume to be her mother exclaiming about how horrible Natalie smells again today and how she needs to at least change her clothes. But Natalie's horrible forgetfulness and ditziness kicks in and she just grabs clothes from the bag to put on, unfortunately you being caught in part of it...

2. You are forced to stay in the bag as Natalie doesn't open it, and to your horror she decides to use it as a cushion while she attempts to do some school work.

3. The zipper has opened just a bit, giving you the ability to escape on your own.

You have the following choices:

1. A "Clean" Change of Clothes

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2. Squished

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3. Escape

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