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A child becomes an outcast, because the child is half human

This choice: She is overwhelmed with relief that the kitsune saved her and she hugs him  •  Go Back...
Chapter #13

A powerful hug

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"That's the kindness thing anyone's ever done for me!" Astrid said as tears came down her eyes. The kitsune looked at Astrid and was confused.

"She looks happy, but she's crying," he thought in his head slowly, "What's going on?" "Excuse me, but why are you crying? Aren't you happy?"

"I-I'm very happy," Astrid said before she suddenly reached forward and picked up the kitsune and held him tight. "Everyone always treated me so badly, looking at me as though I wasn't a person. But you saved me without even knowing who I was. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!" The kitsune was shocked at the act of hugging him. But as he felt this girl embrace him with the warmth of her body, he relaxed. He was quickly learning to enjoy the hug after using another hand to stroke down his back and over his three tail. He even started making a purring noise from his enjoyment, until something happened.

"This feels great," the Kitsune thought relaxing and purring, "This feels great." He took a deep breath and noticed something. "Uh oh, she's squeezing a bit too much. I'm having trouble breathing," he realized. "Girl," he gasped out, "You're crushing me!" Astrid gasped and released the hug.

"Oh I'm so sorry," Astrid said.

"It's all right," the Kitsune said, "I enjoyed it up until you squeezed too hard."

"Then I won't squeeze that hard unless your bigger, okay?" Astrid asked, yawning. "Pardon me."

"You must be tired," the kitsune said. Astrid nodded. "Where could she sleep?" the kitsune thought, "She could sleep on the mat and I'd cover her with my three tails. Or she could sleep on me if I grow big. Which one should I suggest?" "Girl, why don't you . . ."

You have the following choices:

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1. sleep on the mat and I'll cover you with my tails?

2. sleep on my back or side?

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