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Since March 24, 2011
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I've been writing short poems for a while, but never got around to showing them. I finally decided to see what other people think, so THANK YOU, to anyone who bothers to give me their opinion. I'll try to read some of yours and give you some constructive ideas, but for some of you I don' know how much help I'll be
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    If I were you  Open in new Window.
    Rated: E · Other · #2140307
    It's always easier to tell others
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    Remind me  Open in new Window.
    Rated: E · Emotional · #2037427
    why i write. stilll kinda choppy but you can figure it out.
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    I don't  Open in new Window.
    Rated: E · Other · #1975748
    Words... In lines
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    LIFELONG CHAINS  Open in new Window.
    Rated: · Experience · #1940171
    Have you ever watched someone hold themselves down, hold to the past?
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    mist and missed  Open in new Window.
    Rated: E · Dark · #1921101
    make of it what you will, it's only my thoughts.
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    My Prayer  Open in new Window.
    Rated: · Religious · #1921099
    If you know your bible Think Job or Lot
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    Hopeless Romantic  Open in new Window.
    Rated: · Drama · #1907149
    should explain itself
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    Waiting  Open in new Window.
    Rated: E · Dark · #1852827
    I must have been depressed
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    THE DISTANCE  Open in new Window.
    Rated: E · Dark · #1767447
    Kind of a dark look at my final days.... when I get to them.
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    WISH  Open in new Window.
    Rated: E · Experience · #1762339
    just looking for honest opinion
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