Hello, I am a 50 yr. old female who likes writing in my spare time. I am the mother of 3 grown children (1 girl and 2 boys), 1 grandson(grown also) and I recently became a grandma to a wonderful baby girl. I am interested in writing a series of books about a dog and his adventures with my grand-daughter Ava. I have started on a rough draft and would like some feedback on what is right and what is wrong with the writing.