Hello my name is Edison Avret, I write mostly in the world of Faróin which is a fantasy world I created for telling stories and Dungeons and Dragons. I have had an evolving idea for a story in my mind for several years now but it just doesn't seem to be able to actually get made. To get past this writers block I have started writing the "Train" series (haven't got a name yet) which is set in a late 19th century/ early 20th century timeframe and follows a young man into a new part of Faróin which I haven't explored yet myself. Please feel free to critique my work, I am trying to become a better writer and any advice helps.