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Rated: E · Poetry · Emotional · #908048
this is a much shorter version of my orginal poem. should it be this way or the long way?
I tried to get your attention,

Get you to notice me

You hardly ever gave me a glance,

I'm sorry I'm not good enough for you,

But apparently she is,

Tell me what's so special about her,

Obviously it's something I just don't have

Never can, never will get it

As much as I try, I'm not like her

Not even close

You're too blind to see what's

Right in front of your face,

What always was there and

What always will be right in front of your nose

But you'll never know it,

You're always too busy with your girl

To notice any others

But, you'll see when you finally see me

I won't be there, the only thing left

Will be my shadow,

Nothing else

Then you'll be sorry.



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