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Rated: E · Fiction · Sci-fi · #2337279
Humanity has colonized several places in the solar system when disaster strikes.
It was the year 2187, and humanity had stretched its reach across the solar system. Lunar cities glowed beneath Earth’s watchful gaze, Martian colonies thrived under crimson skies, and the asteroid belt buzzed with mining rigs extracting rare metals from tumbling rocks. Even Mercury, the sun-scorched runt of the planets, had become a hub for solar-powered industry, its surface dotted with shielded habitats and automated smelters. Life was hard, but humanity had adapted—until the day everything changed.


It started with a blip. A technician named Zara Kwan, stationed at the Kuiper Belt Observatory, was sipping synthetic coffee when her console pinged. She frowned, adjusting the sensors. The object was faint, moving fast—too fast. She ran the numbers: 340 kilometers per second. That was no local rock. Trajectory analysis spat out a nightmare: a 38-kilometer-wide iron-nickel asteroid, an interloper from beyond the solar system, barreling straight for Mercury. Impact in 87 days. Zara, still bitter from a breakup with her ex, Bertha, smirked as she logged the discovery. “Bertha,” she muttered, naming the asteroid after the woman who’d left her. “You always did know how to crash back into my life.”


Zara’s report hit the networks like a shockwave. Within hours, the solar system erupted into chaos. On Luna, people crowded holo-screens, watching simulations of Bertha slamming into Mercury. On Mars, conspiracy theorists claimed it was an alien weapon. In the asteroid belt, miners abandoned their rigs, fleeing to safer orbits. Panic-buying stripped supply depots bare; ships were commandeered for escape runs.


The news feeds screamed: “Mercury Doomed!” and “Will Earth Be Next?” Some poet at xLe, a tech consortium, dubbed it “The Iron Ex” in a viral post, and the nickname stuck.


The Solar Council convened an emergency session. Scientists confirmed the worst: Bertha would strike Mercury with enough force to obliterate its surface, ejecting trillions of tons of molten metal into space. The impact velocity—340 kps—was unprecedented, dwarfing anything the system had seen. Mercury’s small size meant it couldn’t absorb the hit; it would fracture, spewing debris across the inner planets. Earth and Venus might face meteor storms for decades. The Council’s decision was unanimous: evacuate Mercury. Now.


The evacuation was a logistical nightmare. Mercury housed 1.2 million souls—miners, engineers, and their families—scattered across shielded domes and underground warrens. Every available ship was scrambled: Lunar freighters, Martian troop carriers, even belt-hauler drones retrofitted with seats. The sun’s gravity well made escape punishingly difficult, and solar flares—aggravated by Bertha’s approach—fried comms and navigation systems. Still, the exodus began. Shuttles launched in endless streams, ferrying people to orbit where larger vessels waited. By day 72, the planet was a ghost town, its habitats dark, its smelters cold.


On day 87, Bertha struck. The impact was visible from Earth—a blinding flash as the asteroid vaporized Mercury’s crust, sending a plume of molten iron and nickel skyward. Seismic stations on Luna recorded the shockwave; Mars trembled faintly. For a moment, the solar system held its breath. Then the debris cloud bloomed, a shimmering haze of metal and rock spreading across Mercury’s orbit.
But where some saw disaster, others saw opportunity.


Within weeks, prospectors returned. The debris field was a treasure trove—trillions of tons of high-grade iron, nickel, and trace rare earths, conveniently blasted into space. No drilling required. The first wave of scavengers arrived in patched-together ships, scooping up chunks with magnetic nets. Corporations followed, deploying massive refinery platforms to process the material in orbit. The “Mercury Rush” was born.


Over decades, the industry grew insatiable. What began as opportunistic scavenging evolved into a systematic dismantling. Refineries churned out alloys for ship hulls, habitats, and solar arrays. Mega-corps like Helios Extraction built kilometer-long “stripper ships” to carve up Mercury’s fractured remnants, now little more than a loose aggregate of rubble. By 2240, the planet was unrecognizable—its mass reduced by half, its orbit a glittering ring of industrial sprawl.


Humanity didn’t just survive Bertha; it thrived. The asteroid’s gift rebuilt the solar system. Lunar cities doubled in size, Mars boasted skyscrapers of Mercurian steel, and the asteroid belt became a highway of trade. Mercury, though, was gone—its legacy a testament to human ingenuity and greed. As one miner put it, staring at the dwindling husk through a viewport, “We didn’t just mine it. We ate it whole.”
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