Seeking Review on My Serialized Fiction

Hello, fellow writers and readers!

I'm excited to share a project I've been working on—an ongoing serialized fiction. As the story unfolds, I'd love your thoughts, feedback, and suggestions to help me refine it further. I'm particularly interested in hearing how the characters, themes, and overall direction resonate with you.

Here's a brief description of the story, followed by a link to the chapters posted so far:

DESCRIPTION

In the bustling city of New Delhi, Dhruv Sharma's life is a delicate weave of family responsibilities, past traumas, and present challenges. As he navigates the complexities of his new job in an IT company, Dhruv's reserved nature and fear of attachment are tested by his colleagues: the humorous Karan, the steadfast Aryan, and the inquisitive Ananya. When they are handed a crucial project, personal struggles and old traumas surface, threatening their success and unity.

Haunted by a past of unreciprocated friendships, Dhruv's journey is one of quiet resilience and unspoken emotions. As he helps his colleagues through their difficulties, he must confront his fears and find strength in the connections he never sought. "Threads of Fate" weaves a story of subtle emotions, hidden depths, and the unseen bonds that shape our lives, revealing how intertwined destinies can lead to unexpected transformations.

LINK https://getinkspired.com/story/455089/threads-of-fate/

I would greatly appreciate any feedback you can provide. Whether it’s about the plot, character development, or even the writing style, every bit of input will help me refine and improve the story.

Specific Areas I’m Looking for Feedback On:

Does the theme of false friendships resonate well throughout the narrative?
Are the characters’ actions and motivations clear and relatable?
How is the pacing of the story so far?
I’m open to all kinds of constructive criticism, so please don’t hold back! Your insights will be incredibly valuable as I continue to develop the story.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. Looking forward to hearing your thoughts!