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by Prier Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ · Short Story · Crime/Gangster · #2324510
He stole her phone, but she's determined to get it back.
The Stolen Moment


         Susan stood frozen in the bustling marketplace, her hand instinctively reaching for the pocket where her phone should have been. The space felt hollow, like a bird's nest robbed of its eggs. She closed her eyes, inhaling the mingled scents of ripe fruit and grilled meats that suddenly seemed less enticing.

         The man who'd elbowed her was long gone, swallowed by the sea of bodies that ebbed and flowed around her. She remembered his face only as a fleeting impression – dark eyes, a day's stubble, the brim of a worn baseball cap. It was as if he'd been a ghost, materializing just long enough to leave her feeling violated and alone.

         Susan's fingers trembled as she borrowed a phone from a sympathetic vendor. The familiar digits of her own number felt foreign as she punched them in, each tone a pebble dropping into a still pond. When the man answered, his voice was gruff, impatient. She explained about the personal information, the photos of her late mother, the notes for her unfinished novel. Her words tumbled out like autumn leaves, scattering in the wind of his indifference. The click of disconnection echoed in her ear like a gunshot.

         As she handed the phone back to the vendor, Susan caught sight of her reflection in a shop window. She looked older somehow, the lines around her eyes deeper, as if the loss of her phone had aged her in minutes. She thought of her father, how he'd always told her to stand up for herself. "You're made of tougher stuff than you know, Susie-Q," he'd say, his calloused hand gentle on her shoulder.

         The crowd continued to move around her, a river parting around a stone. Susan felt the weight of decision settle on her like a cloak. She could go to the police, file a report that would likely gather dust in some forgotten drawer. Or she could take action, become the author of her own story rather than a passive character.

         As she began to walk, her steps grew more purposeful. The world seemed to shift, the ordinary taking on hints of the extraordinary. A pigeon strutted past, its iridescent feathers shimmering with an almost supernatural glow. The chatter of the crowd faded to a distant hum, replaced by the steady rhythm of her heartbeat.

         Susan found herself in a part of town she'd never explored before. The buildings here were older, their facades weathered like the faces of wise elders. A small antique shop caught her eye, its window display a jumble of curiosities. Among them, an old rotary phone sat like a sentinel of a bygone era.

         The bell above the door tinkled as she entered, a sound that seemed to ripple through time itself. The shopkeeper, an elderly woman with eyes like polished amber, looked up from her book.

         "I've been expecting you," the woman said, her voice carrying the warmth of a summer breeze.

         Susan blinked, momentarily taken aback. "I'm looking for someone," she found herself saying. "A man who took something from me."

         The old woman nodded sagely, reaching beneath the counter. She produced a small, ornate compass, its needle spinning wildly before settling with decisive certainty.

         "North by northeast," the shopkeeper said. "Follow where it leads, and you'll find what you seek."

         Susan took the compass, its weight in her palm both comforting and thrilling. As she stepped back onto the street, the world seemed different, charged with possibility. The compass pulled her forward, through winding alleys and across bustling intersections.

         Time became fluid, stretching and contracting like taffy. Susan barely noticed the sun's arc across the sky, lost in the rhythm of her quest. The compass led her to a small park, where children's laughter mingled with the rustle of leaves.

         There, on a bench beneath an ancient oak, sat the man. His hat was pulled low, but Susan recognized the slope of his shoulders, the way his fingers drummed restlessly against his knee. Her phone lay beside him, a black rectangle that seemed to pulse with importance.

         As Susan approached, leaves crunching beneath her feet, the man looked up. Recognition flashed in his eyes, followed quickly by something else – shame, perhaps, or regret.

         "I was going to return it," he said, his voice softer than she remembered. "I just... I needed to make a call. My daughter, she's in the hospital. I couldn't afford..."

         His words trailed off, but the pain in his eyes spoke volumes. Susan felt her anger dissipate like morning mist, replaced by a complicated tangle of emotions she couldn't quite name.

         She sat beside him, the bench creaking softly beneath their combined weight. "Tell me about your daughter," she said gently.

         As the man spoke, his story unfolding like a delicate origami, Susan realized that sometimes the things we lose lead us to what we truly need to find. The compass in her pocket seemed to hum with approval, as if to say that not all treasures are made of metal and glass.

         The afternoon light softened, painting the park in hues of gold and amber. Susan listened, really listened, to the man's tale of struggle and hope. When he finished, she reached for her phone, but instead of taking it, she opened the contacts.

         "What's your daughter's name?" she asked, her fingers poised over the keypad.

         The man looked at her, confusion giving way to gratitude. As Susan added the number to her contacts, she felt a shift within herself, as if a long-closed door had finally swung open.

         They parted ways as the streetlights flickered to life, the man clutching a piece of paper with Susan's number, a promise of help scrawled beneath it. Susan walked home, her recovered phone a comfortable weight in her pocket, but it was the compass that she held, its needle now still, pointing towards a future she couldn't yet see but somehow knew she was ready to face.


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