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Rated: E · Short Story · Action/Adventure · #2302300
This is in my opinion the greatest story ever written so I want an in depth critique
The Rapper Man
There was a bizarre alien called the rapper man. He lived in a distant galaxy in the universe inside the core of a star. However that star exploded because of Logan Paul and Jake Paul existing causing KSI to punch the Quantum Manifold Membrane triggering magnetochromoelectrodynamical fluctuations exploding the star. The rapper man drove in his Porsche gt3 to the sun's core faster than light by being cool and punching Logan Paul causing a vibration to explode and and made his hit song called yo man i'm a rapper man which caused a Quantum Topological Space to think It's Everyday Bro is better than In the Final and Adventure's End. However Jake Paul made his song called it's everyday bro due to antimatter Rapper Man punching Jake Paul and causing Quantum Electrodynamical fluctuations on the topological spacetime manifold. which is what made the song so bad. Mr Trinh then had him join his choir class in order to save the world from jake paul's music where he misbehaved due to logan paul punching quark plasma membranes and causing relativistic quark gases to battle in a boxing match where the quarks turned into Logan Paul and KSI due to opening a spacetime wormhole on the quantum membrane. Logan Paul and KSI battled and eventually Dark Bowser and Bowser showed up and battled where Mr Trinh came and made Dark Bowser grounded by confining him to the surface of a hypersphere while Bowser chanted that he was the original Bowser. At guys night out he roasted spencer and was told no more choir parties even though Logan Paul and Jake Paul's music was so bad and terrible it influenced the Quantum Membrane Vibrations on the topological Spacetime manifold causing a relativistic supersymmetric Chromodynamical Manifold wavefunction to collapse into black hole which Dark Bowser tried to escape from but Bowser punched him before he could escape and Dark Bowser fell back into the black hole. He kept misbehaving and mocked mr trinh and say why then was sent to the principal's office, and was kicked out of choir and banned from the choir dimension and the topological nonrenormalizable membrane punched him. He then said that mr trinh was a deformed whale and got after school detention, while mr trinh became mr boom boom bam and made the class go to ferndell. Then kamin dornes showed up and was bad. The rapper man had a cosmic battle and kamin dornes got iss where he vaped and got sent ferndell where the rapper man made a diss track on him. Then in boring theater class, he found out that ninja was in area 51 captured by aliens who made fortnite unfair so that he can rage so loud that aliens come to earth and make people play hotel mario because of jake paul's song. The rapper man then put stickers on mr boom boom bam's door because Jake Paul had bad music. The aliens came and the rapper man showed them hard boring unfair quantum math which couldn't be solved even numerically and they ran away and were told that if they return they will be forced to do boring math for eternity while listening to it's everyday bro in a topological quantum hydroelectrochromopyrocryogeodynamical membrane on a Geoflavoelecteothermomagnetodynamical manifold in a 10 dimensional nonrenormalizable curved spacetime continuum. However Jake Paul and Logan Paul was forced to do hard math for eternity and grounded in the topological quantum manifold continuum. Then Chris Hemsworth showed up to the sun’s core and Rapper man made him Thor with the power of the Quantum Relativistic Chromodynamical Membrane Continuum. The Rapper Man and Chris Hemsworth teamed up as Jake Paul’s followers were trying to break him out of the Nonrenormalizable Chromodynamical Quantum Field doing boring math. Rapper Man and Chris Hemsworth then battled team 10 in a boxing match. Team 10 Jake Pauls followers then blasted them with a gyrogeochromochemochloropyrocryoelectrodynamical nonrenormalizable quantum topological laser beam. They then were transported to a Nonperturbative relativistic quark membrane in a 20 dimensional topological spacetime continuum. Then Jake and Logan Paul are broken out by Nick Crompton who as a reward makes England a city. Then Chris Hemsworth and Rapper Man then encounter Dark Bowser and fight in a boxing match where they are overpowered by Dark Bowser then Bowser comes and delivers a powerful punch and traps him in a Quantum Topological Black hole where he is given a knockout punch by Bowser with Bowser giving a victory pose. Then Bowser teams up with Chris Hemsworth and the Rapper man and they all learn how to use the power of the Field Operators to create particles and vow to stop Jake and Logan Paul once and for all. Nick Crompton then with the Antiparticle operators creates the city of england with and a giant MMA stadium to fight everyone he doesnt like. Then they vow to take over the earth. Then Rapper Man, Chris Hemsworth, and Bowser then fight the particles popping into existence as Ninja has raged about Fortnite so loud he smashed the gaming pc which caused many particles to pop out of the vacuum to fight the trio with Chris Hemsworth summoning Thor’s hammer to fight the chromodynamical particles and Bowser punching the Field Fluctuations in the topological nonrenormalizable quantum membrane. Then Bowser and Rapper man use the power of Quantum entanglement and entangle due to a quantum topological vibration continuum and Bowser rages and with the power of the Quantum Chromoelectroflavodynamical nonperturbative quantum field destroys all the particles and gets energized enough that they teleport with chris hemsworth. This disentangles Bowser and Rapper Man who then fight a topological wormhole in a lorentzian spacetime while In The final plays with bowser giving it a knockout punch. Then Quantum fluctuations fight while Ninja continues to rage about losing Fortnite. Then they go to the city of england the trio and all entangle into one entity composed of the rapper man, chris hemsworth, and bowser while punching a topological quark field while singing Yo Man Im a Rapper Man. Then they fight Ninja in the city if england while a relativistic topological Electrodynamic membrane time reverses in a quantum nonrenormalizable continuum due to the Lorentzian Hamiltonian Functional Operatorial Membrane. Then the relativistic quark gases fight in a topological quantum battle while adventure’s end plays. Then the heroes defeat Ninja who is trapped in a Quantum Manifold membrane raging about Fortnite. Then they cause quantum geochromoflavoelectrodynamocal fluctuations in a topological relativistic nonrenormalizable spacetime continuum to battle with antiparticles guarding the city of england. Then the quark membrane battles KSI in a topological nonrenormalizable battle as the universe collapses into a relativistic quantum membrane. Then the trio fights team 10 in the city of england and create so many particles with the Quantum Field Operators which relativistically smash into the antiparticles creating a huge explosion as the city of england collapses into a topological quark membrane. The trio is disentangled and Quantum chromodynamical fluctuations team up with quantum electrodynamical fluctuations and punch the antiparticles in an MMA fight. Then Bowser throws a punch at jake paul so hard it disentangles team 10 and nick crompton because of the Ripples of the Quantum Spacetime continuum and the topological quantum membrane vibrates as a 10 dimensional nonrenormalizable spacetime manifold collapses. Then Nick Crompton creates many antiparticles in the topological quantum functional membrane. Then the Rapper Man creates so many particles with the field operators it causes a huge explosion as strong as a Gamma Ray Burst. Then after the dust settled Rapper Man sends Nick Crompton, Jake Paul, and Team 10 to a hypersphere dimension in a nonrenormalizable quantum membrane to do boring hard math for eternity and yells that they are grounded. Then Bowser knocked out from the explosion wakes up and throws a victory punch and Chris Hemsworth energized by the battle becomes the mayor of Hemsworth city in place of the city of england as a reward for helping Rapper Man and Bowser. Then Rapper Man and Bowser drive in the porsche GT3 to the sun’s core singing yo man I’m a rapper man. Then in Hemsworth city a Quantum Sharknado and Quantum Godzilla appeared and entangled with the quantum nonrenormalizable topological vacuum fluctuations. Chris Hemsworth then Turned the hammer into a Quantum one and caused topological quark membranes to punch the sharknado and bosonic Supersymmetric quantum fields punched godzilla. Then In the Sun’s core Bowser teleported by the power of topological Quantum Chromoelectrogeocryodynamical Tunneling went to a bar to celebrate his accomplishment. A proton then walked into the bar along with other particles and cut Bowser in line with the power of quantum electromagnetic tunneling. Bowser then seeing the proton wondered if he was powerful enough to deconfine the quarks. He punched it with the power of the quantum quark membrane and the proton punched back with the power of the Chromodynamical Quantum membrane and Bowser kept punching. Their fighting then caused Quantum Topological fluctuations to cause a topological wormhole manifold to oscillate and all the particles were fighting and oscillating the quantum field with Bowser throwing his hardest punches as the fields kept creating particles and a huge topological quantum membrane exploded in a 10 dimensional Electrodynamical manifold membrane. Bowser kept pun lol ching and the Quantum topological electrochromoflavodynamical membrane exploded and punched Bowser with Bowser’s powerful punches all the quantum membranes and particles turned to energy and caused an infinite quark membrane continuum to collapse in a 10 dimensional quantum wormhole membrane and the cosmic string continuum collapsed with the universe collapsing and Bowser then punches the topological quantum membrane and then wakes up on the bar floor with Doctor Mike Varshavski doing chest compressions. Bowser gets up angry wondering what happened and Dr Mike tells him that he ran into the bar and drank all the bar’s liquor and passed out on the floor. Bowser says he had a dream where he got in a bar fight with protons and other particles and caused topological quantum fluctuations to collapse the universe then punched the spacetime continuum. Then Bowser challenges Dr Mike to a boxing match and with the power of the topological quantum manifold they teleport to a boxing arena and Dr Mike doesnt want to fight and Bowser keeps throwing punches and Dr Mike is dodging. Then Bowser throws a Right Cross and Dr Mike ducks and gives Bowser a hard chest compression which destabilizes the Topological Quantum Chromodynamical Membrane and causes a supersymmetric Wormhole to undergo a Topological phase transition and Bowser is teleported through a wormhole in the Nonperturbative quantum manifold to Hemsworth city with Chris Hemsworth still fighting Godzilla and the Sharknado. Then Bowser launched a Quantum Electrodynamical punch at godzilla with Dr Mike with the power of the Chest Compressions helping injured people due to the battle. Then Bowser threw a punch so hard it caused quantum chromomagnetodynamical oscillations in the topological quantum membrane that the Rapper Man was alerted and using an electromagnetodynamical wormhole in the quantum topological spacetime continuum teleported to Hemsworth city and with the power of the Field Operators created so many particles which punched the Sharknado and Knocked Godzilla out with the power of the quantum topological field oscillations. Then Bowser with the power of the topological nonrenormalizable chromodynamical quantum membrane threw a punch at the sharknado and caused a quantum topological defect in the spacetime continuum releasing Dark Bowser with In the Final Playing. Then Bowser punched Dark Bowser yelling Showtime. This caused Quantum Fields to fluctuate and punch Bowser with the power of Topological quantum Phase transitions. Then Bowser gave Dark Bowser a punch so hard he flew into Godzilla and caused Quantum Topological nonrenormalizable fluctuations to create a wormhole which sucked the sharknado into a 9000 dimensional Quantum Electrodynamical manifold. Then Bowser Punched Godzilla full force and released the sharknado and the rapper man knocked out Dark Bowser with the power of field operators creating so many quantum fluctuations in the topological quantum field. Then Bowser delivered a full force punch to Dark Bowser knocking him out causing the Grand unified Neutrino Fields to collide with quantum electrodynamical topological fields inducing a quantum topological phase transition and The rapper man with the power of the field operators create so many particles and field fluctuations opening a wormhole in the spacetime continnum so that the Sharknado, Dark Bowser, and Godzilla were banished to the surface of a topological quantum chromodynamical hypersphere. After the battle Bowser yelled Im the real bowser and gave a victory pose while the Smash bros brawl opening theme played. The rapper man was happy he won and Chris Hemsworth wanted to know what caused this. Then Doctor Mike rejoined them after doing chest compressions and said wow cant believe we won then said so who is behind this. Then with the power of the topological spacetime wormhole the Rapper man saw Jake paul was behind it as he quantum tunneled out of doing boring math by causing quantum fluctuations of the Electrodynamical Bosonic field in the topological spacetime continuum and is in a galaxy 1 billion light years away cackling about his evil plans. Then in Rapper Man’s Porsche Gt3 they drive to the galaxy and confront Jake Paul and he uses the power of the quantum field operators to create many topological quantum fluctuations in the spacetime continuum to punch the main characters. Then Bowser throws a punch so hard it induces a topological quantum phase transition and destroys the topological quantum fluctuation and knocks Jake Paul off his feet. Then the characters Rapper Man, Bowser, Doctor Mike, and Chris Hemsworth all combine into their final form with the power of the Quantum topological chromodynamical field operators bound by topological quantum bosonic gluons. Then they go and throw a punch at Jake Paul so hard it causes fluctuations in the spacetime continuum and KSI and Logan Paul appear and start fighting in a boxing match but then team up with Jake Paul and summon Godzilla, the Sharknado, and Dark Bowser who are trapped in a quantum hypersphere dimension. They all combine into a final form and the 2 start fighting in an MMA fight and the heroes throw a punch at the villains which they duck and counter causing ripples in the spacetime continuum. Then the heroes with their hardest punch strike the combined form of the villains and destabilize the spacetime continuum causing quark vacuum fluctuations opening a wormhole. KSI and Logan Paul are knocked out and sucked in banished to a 9 dimensional quantum hypersphere grounded and forced do boring hard math to eternity. Then Jake Paul angry by the defeat sings its everyday bro which disturbs the quantum topological spacetime manifold and causes the heroes to become separated and Bowser angry throws a knockout punch at Dark Bowser and banishes him inside the wormhole and gets grounded for eternity. Then Dr Mike and Jake Paul engage in a boxing match with Jake Paul knocking Dr Mike out. Then the Rapper man goes and fights Jake Paul with the field operators while Chris Hemsworth wakes Dr Mike up with him saying you should have done chest compressions and I need to train boxing more. Then they team up and fight the Sharknado and Godzilla while Rapper man uses the quantum field operators to create many particles which punch Jake Paul while Jake Paul using his field operators sends particles to punch the rapper man but the particles start punching each other. Then Jake Paul and Rapper Man keep punching each other and cause topological quantum fluctuations to propagate across the universe. Then Adventure’s end from Mario and Luigi Dream Team played during the fight. Then Bowser joined the fight with Godzilla and Sharknado and punched Godzilla so hard it caused quantum geochromoelectrohydropyrocryolithoaerodynamical fluctuations in the topological spacetime continuum knocking the Sharknado down. Then Chris Hemsworth destroyed the Sharknado with the power of his hammer and Godzilla and Sharknado were sucked into the wormhole banished to a quantum topological manifold. Then the Rapper Man fighting Jake Paul created so many particles it vibrated the quantum spacetime continuum and caused topological Quantum geochromohydroelectropyrodynamical fluctuations to punch Jake Paul so hard it caused a tear in the spacetime continuum and Jake Paul got sucked into the wormhole and was grounded and forced to do Hard Math for eternity as punishment for unleashing a Sharknado and Godzilla. Then all the heroes go to the Sun’s Core in the Porsche Gt3 and celebrate their victory over Jake Paul by punching the nuclei trying to deconfine the quarks in the sun’s core to train their boxing while the smash bros brawl theme played.
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