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Haven't written anything for a long time, A poem I'm Very Rusty |
As Best I Can by Keaton Foster I stand, I stood. Present Or past tense Matters not. When and how, Even less. Upon an edge, To myself It was said: There it is, An end, Of choice, Of reason. The why And how come. One step forward, Closer than before, Inches from Nevermore. I would not, Without question, Continue on. Existence, The bitch cousin Of truly living. The height, Far too great. The weight, Unequivocally more. I’d be alive, Then not. No fear finds me, No realities scare me. I’m here On my own accord. I own the right To decide for myself And dare I say Everyone else. Fear, A fool's game. Pain, Equally lame. Hope For dopes. Faith and fate, Gods upon And within Themselves. I have neither And I have none. I am just alive, Living as sorts, As best I can, As worst as I must. I’ve done many Terrible things In the name of, Under the guise of, Surviving What for most Would have been Not survivable. I have shame, I own such guilt, Like a knot in my chest. It resides next to My foolish heart. Each beat is at risk, Each thump betrays The need it creates. My lungs inflate, My blood flows, Autonomously controlled By a mind that has And always will Betray what could be With what I perceive. Reality is different For a man like me. What is real Is based off What has been And not what is. I can’t escape, Nor let go of A past of absolutes. I was tortured, Abused, Used and trashed, Thrown away By those who For a time decided My faith as well as fate. I am broken, Destroyed. I fight each day As best I can, But I fear it’s a fight Increasingly I can’t And won’t ever win… Written by Keaton Foster Copyright © 2008-2021 Synopsis This poem is a raw and poignant exploration of existential despair, resilience, and the struggle to find meaning amidst personal trauma. The narrator reflects on their past, present, and the choices they have made, revealing deep emotional scars and a profound sense of isolation. Analysis: Temporal Fluidity: The opening lines emphasize the fluidity of time, suggesting that the past and present are intertwined and equally significant in shaping the narrator's experience ("I stand / I stood / Present / Or past tense / Matters not"). Existential Contemplation: The narrator stands on the edge, contemplating the end and the meaning of existence. This edge symbolizes a precipice, both literal and metaphorical, representing the brink of life and death, choice and fate ("Upon an edge / To myself / It was said / There it is / An end"). Autonomy and Defiance: There is a strong assertion of personal autonomy and defiance against fear and external realities ("I’m here / On my own accord / I own the right / To decide for myself"). This highlights a desire for control in a life that has often been dictated by others. Rejection of Conventional Beliefs: The poem dismisses common notions of fear, pain, hope, faith, and fate as irrelevant or misleading ("Fear / A fools game / Pain / Equally lame / Hope / For dopes"). This rejection reflects a deep cynicism born from personal suffering. Survival and Shame: The narrator reveals a history of doing terrible things to survive, leading to deep-seated shame and guilt ("I’ve done many / Terrible things / In the name of / Under the guise of / Surviving"). The internal conflict between survival and morality is palpable. Physical and Emotional Autonomy: The poem describes the body's autonomic functions juxtaposed with a mind that perceives reality through the lens of past trauma ("My lungs inflate / My blood flows / Autonomously controlled / By a mind that has / And always will / Betray what could be"). Trauma and Resilience: The narrator acknowledges the impact of past abuse and the ongoing struggle to cope with its effects ("I was tortured / Abused / Used and trashed / Thrown away"). Despite this, there is an underlying resilience in their continued fight for survival. Despair and Resignation: The poem concludes with a sense of increasing despair and a recognition of the potential futility of their struggle ("I fight each day / As best I can / But I fear it’s a fight / Increasingly I can’t / And won’t ever win"). Interpretation: The poem is a deeply personal narrative of enduring and grappling with past traumas, asserting autonomy in the face of overwhelming adversity, and questioning the very foundations of hope and belief. It reflects the narrator's ongoing battle with the emotional scars left by abuse and the complex interplay between survival instincts and moral conscience. The recurring themes of time, choice, and autonomy highlight the struggle to find agency and meaning in a life marked by suffering and control by others. The rejection of conventional beliefs and the emphasis on personal perception underscore a profound disillusionment with traditional sources of comfort and meaning. Ultimately, the poem is a testament to human resilience and the complexity of the human condition, portraying a relentless fight for survival and self-determination amidst the shadows of a traumatic past. |