Shoe Red

This is just a teaser. I have over 18,000 words written but before I go any further I am trying to see if the plot has what it takes to make readers want to read. Let me know what you think or if you want to see more.

I told her not to pick it up, I told her to leave it lying there. it's just a stupid shoe. But I know Corrinne, once she gets something set in her mind she doesn't let it go. I knew as soon as she saw it lying by the curb that the summer would be ruined before it began.