A Great vacation

         I was sitting on the front porch talking to me cousin Audrey. "So are you ready for our trip?" she asked enthusiastically.
         "Yeah, the only bad thing is going to be the car ride there." I said as I looked out over the yard. This trip was especially special, because we were going to finally ride the world's tallest waterslide.
         I was extremely nervous, but I was also very exited. I had been waiting for three years to ride this waterslide. This trip was going to change my life, whether I knew it or not.
         My dad and I had been planning this for at least a year. I couldn't wait to get on the road. This was going to be the experience of a lifetime.

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         The car ride to Kansas City was long, but I was happy to arrive. The first thing we did was unload our bags at the hotel. After everyone had got ready we went to the mall to run around. I enjoyed the mall, but was ready for the next day.

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         The next morning we arrived early to the water park. Everyone complained that we showed up to early. "None of y'all will be complaining when we are the first ones to ride." My dad said, an annoyed expression in his voice.
         "Yeah, I want to be able to ride the waterslide before it gets too crowded." I said.
         "I'm ready to ride too!" My cousin Amber replied.
         Once the park opened, we went straight to the slide and got in line. I was a little terrifies looking up at the seventeen story beast. I still don't know what possessed me to ride that thing.

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         The next day we drove to Minnesota, It was a long ride, but once we got to the mall of America it was worth it. Walling into the mall, I didn't see anything new, until I reached the center. I was astonished when I got to the center, and saw the gigantic amusement park.
         My dad and I went on the zip-line and rope coarse.

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         That night we drove to St Louise. As soon as we got to the hotel, I went straight to the room.
         The next morning, we went to the zoo. I absolutely loved seeing the wide variety of different animals. I think my favorite part, was getting to ride the train around the entire zoo.
         That night we went to the Cheese Cake Factory. I enjoyed the food, but by the time I ate, I couldn't eat any cheesecake.

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         The last stop on our trip was Mississippi. I personally think this was my favorite stop. Mississippi has always been my favorite spot, because of all the trees. Most of my family also lives there. My dad, sister, and I stayed in my uncle Larry's cabin.

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         After four days in Mississippi, we headed home.