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Here are some humble pieces that could use your feedback.
Any information you can give me to help me improve my writing would be greatly appreciated.

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Are you Sure...?  (18+) Are you sure you really know what you would do? #2132539 by slowmotionsunset

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Teach Them To Be Silent  (13+) Can you die of boredom? #2132318 by slowmotionsunset

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Wine, Baby  (13+) A future husband and wife go on their first date. #2129674 by slowmotionsunset

And, if you wouldn't mind, I have an unfinished short story (my first), that I am looking for guidance on:

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Blessed Be Thy Name  (GC) A true-believer finally gets to meet God. My first attempt at a short story: will finish. #2133020 by slowmotionsunset

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SlowMotionSunset