Fading Away

This is a song that I was working on, I was aiming for a hard rock/metal feel, along the lines of Seether, Disturbed, Breaking Benjamin. Let me know what you guys think. Good, bad, ugly.


[Intro]
I'm fading away
Drowning myself with every drink I take
Slowly fading away
Because of you I'm fading away


[verse 1]

I TAKE ANOTHER DRINK trying to kill the pain
Can't believe you did this to me
EVERYWHERE I LOOK I SEE YOUR FACE, driving me insane
Everywhere I go you're haunting me
thanks to you I'M FADING AT A SICKENING PACE


[pre chorus]

I tried so hard to understand you
Couldn't you see that I Loved you
I didn't want it to end this way
One shot, shattered my world through
You took everything away

[chorus]
I am FADING AWAY
Drowning myself with every drink I take
Slowly I keep FADING AWAY
away from evrything I know
Everything I love died with you
with nothing left I FADE AWAY

I KEEP FADING AWAY
FADING AWAY x3


[verse 2]
I wish I knew what possessed you
to put a bullet through (your head)
Why did you take yourself away from me
Wish someone could tell me why, COULD SAVE ME
because I'm FADING AWAY

[pre chorus]

[chorus]

[bridge]
One more drink (just another drink)
One more hit (just another hit)
I
Fade
Away
Fading......Away
One more drink (just another drink)
One more hit (just another hit)
and I will Fade (fade) Away (away)
BECAUSE OF YOU

[final chorus]
I'M FADING AWAY
DROWNING MYSELF WITH EVERY DRINK I TAKE
SLOWLY I KEEP FADING AWAY
away from evrything I know
EVERYTHING THAT I LOVED DIED WITH YOU
with nothing left I FADE AWAY
I WILL FADE NO MORE FOR YOU