Chains and Armor

These sites and I don't get along. I want to share my stories but they are unfinished. I want to know what people think as I write. The problem is, I don't write from start to finish. If you don't mind reading events out of order, then you found the right girl.

Chains and Armor Synopsis:

In the kingdom of Aspira, if the prince chooses a maiden to be his bride, she cannot refuse. Almost every girl would gladly accept, but then there's Shay, a commoner who one day riding her horse decided to take a new trail. This trail led her to Prince Noah.