Lost in the Moment

Creak, reak, creak, reak

I was lost in the melodic tunes of the rocking of my chair.
The sun flashed a bright star, as it ducked behind the mountains.

Blow . . . sip . . . blow

I couldn't help but to let out a little laugh
as I glanced at my husband in the midst of his hot coffee ritual.

Letting out a sigh of contentment, lost in the relaxation,
I let myself melt into the easiness of the moment.

Plop, swoosh, plop

The hot tub called to us with its lively, healing bubbles.

Clink, clink . . . clink, clink

Ice jingled against my glass, as the vortex
of liquid swirled in ever widening circles, caused from
the mindless stirring with my finger.

My thoughts were lost in congealed imaginings
If only we were able to stay here forever.

Smells wafted throughout the rugged terrain,
as fresh baked goods
floated upon the air.

But life on the mountain still slumbered.

(20 lines)



Subject or Theme: A Day (or night) at the ... (park, beach, river, wherever) ▼

but you must be descriptive in a way that uses onomatopoeia at least four times. Please look it up if you don't know what it means.
Word(s) to Include: bake, congeal, laugh, vortex (or any derivatives of these words)
Forbidden Word(s): day, night, tree, ocean, water, grass, leaf (leaves), flower, bird, dog, cat, duck(or any derivatives of these words)
Additional Parameters: Must be at least 20 lines. Remember, do not use forbidden words ANYWHERE, including title or the brief description.