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Rated: 18+ · Poetry · Holiday · #1966553
Companion poem to "Here Lies Santa Claus"
Everyone knows the reindeer did it:
how can you fault them for going insane?
With the cold, the load, and sound of the whip.

The elves themselves must bear part of the blame;
the sled was too heavy for eight reindeer
how can you fault them for going insane?

They did their best to overcome the fear
of the cold, the whip and unbalanced load;
the sled was too heavy for eight reindeer.

So Dasher and Comet the teams pace slowed,
they were tired and needed a rest because
of the cold, the whip and unbalanced load;

Instead of balancing the load, Santa Clause
yelled and cracked his whip at them even though
they were tired and needed a rest because

they rebelled and stomped him into the snow.
Everyone knows the reindeer did it,
when Santa yelled and cracked his whip even though
they feared the cold, load, and sound of the whip.

Form: Terzanelle consist of 5 three line stanzas and 1 four line stanza. The middle line of first stanza becomes the last line of the next stanza this continues until the last stanza. In the last stanza the first line of the first stanza become the second line, the middle line of the proceeding stanza becomes the third line, and the last line of the first stanza becomes the last line.

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