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Rated: E · Poetry · Opinion · #1911213
Just an opinion I used to have while studying poetry at GCSE,decided to portray it to you
Now there's one thing I simply can't stand,be it because I am young and yet do not understand.



Why would you bother to slave in ink on the paper,expressing your thoughts through grand metaphors,

When a considerable amount of working time later, you've constructed the greatest and most noble of bores?



Oh yes through MY adolescent eyes;

there's no real point in wasting your time

(please don't be offended,for this opinion is mine)

on writing a poem if it just doesn't rhyme.



For it could be of great quality,fantastically crafted,words carefully chosen...but its just such a terrible shame.

Because this text could go from rags to riches,by simple making the words sound the same.

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