Love poem. Need suggestions towards ending, use of rhyme, etc. |
Quiet your qualms, Ease your fears, You’ve only just hit 22 years. The days are long And the news has past, But soon you’d realize that at last. The stressful days And forgotten nights The fears inside you won’t let take flight. Put down your fist and stand your ground, Don’t let the world pull you down. Love with your heart, Think with your mind, Perhaps one day they might intertwine. Lives are long and mistakes are made, You have more chances than you think you may. Forget limitations— withdraw expectations. Be who you are. For that alone has gotten you far. Your love is strong and dedication severe, You’re a decent man who has nothing to fear. The world is your playground, so go out and play And I’ll always hope… you'd come back someday. Learn what you must and see what you can And I’ll move along I’ll fall once again— But nothing will be Like you and me can. Today is the day, that I let it all go, But your strength and your passion I will always withhold. You’ve stepped on my heart, Those footprints have stained. Till death do me part, They’ll forever remain |