Dear me

Dear me.

I think you should work on punctuation. It really holds you back on your writing.And slight better spelling.No one wants to read a story with the word coke as cok.And this year I need you to work on reading and reviewing. You haven,t read enough.It makes you appear somewhat selfish.Plus other writers apreciate it.And In my opinion you should work on your temper toward people.One bad review your off like a bullet.They are being honest not rude.And I also think you could use work in how much you write.Your passionate.But you have to write to really be good.Practice makes perfect.Why don't you also work on your grammar?Better wording makes a story interesting.

Good luck.

~Me