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Rated: E · Poetry · Music · #1827592
its probably terrible but constructive criticism would be helpful so i can improve
Hand me a pile of dirt from the person I love and I’ll say its gold
Take in a deep breath and hold…
Say what you wanna say to me cause one day I won’t respond
I’ll only be a memory in your web of lies.
Sometimes I feel like everything would be better if we cut off all ties,
Then things wouldn’t be so hard.
Sleeping would be so easy and breathing would be painless.
But your smile in my head is slowin’ down progress

Chorus
I hope you know when you look at me with those eyes it makes me wish I was blind
It hurts too much to know that what you’re looking for you can’t find
And we all just want peace of mind

In all the commotion the night you realized you couldn’t be alone anymore
You turned and wiped the tears away from all the faces you have hurt.
And I wondered how it would be for you to not have another restless night
It must have felt pretty good to get your hands clean from all the dirt,
So I’m guessing you slept pretty good after our fight.

Chorus
I hope you know when you look at me with those eyes it makes me wish I was blind
It hurts too much to know that what you’re looking for you can’t find
And we all just want peace of mind
(Repeat)

You might be scared
Let me lead you by the hand you won’t have anything to fear
Just close your eyes my dear.
This is the silent plea that I say with waiting breath
Till the day you realize I can put all your worries to death.
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