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Rated: E · Lyrics · Emotional · #1769319
Song I wrote. Not sure about framing the chorus though, critique wanted please, thanks.
It was the middle of a cold winters night
I felt you shiver and asked if everything was all right
You started to cry, and I teared up too
I said don't worry baby, I'll always love you.

The smile that crossed your face warmed my heart
I held you close and never wanted to be apart
I knew the time was right and fell to my knee
I said please baby, will you marry me?

Cuz I'm closer to you than I've ever been
When I see your face I know I'm in heaven
The taste of your lips sends shivers down my spine
I can see the love in your eyes and I know everything will be fine.

The day came when your daddy walked you down the aisle
That short little walk seemed like it was a mile
We said our vows, and I kissed my wife
I said Baby, I'll love you my entire life.

The news came back letting us know we were gonna have a baby boy
and I thought I was going to jump with joy
The first time you held him in your arms
I said Baby, we'll always protect him from harm.

Cuz I'm closer to you than I've ever been
When I see your face I know I'm in heaven
The taste of your lips sends shivers down my spine
I can see the love in your eyes and I know everything will be fine.

I was driving home from work when I got the call
Telling me to hurry down to the hospital
There's been an accident and she doesn't have much time
I said Doc, if she needs a heart just give her mine.

I held her hand as she headed towards the light
I broke down and cried as she lost her fight
Her chest stood still and I knew she reached the end of her line
I whispered wait for me baby, cuz I'll love you until the end of time.

Cuz I'm closer to you than I've ever been
When I see your face I know I'm in heaven
The taste of your lips sends shivers down my spine
I can see the love in your eyes and I know everything will be fine.

God finally called me home and I approached heavens gate
worrying that the love of my life decided not to wait
but it appears that my fears should have been forgotten
because you were standing there with your arms wide open.

We held each other for what seemed like days
the path that had been laid out had led the way
to the soul that would always love me
i had chosen the right one with whom to spend all eternity.

Cuz I'm closer to you than I've ever been
When I see your face I know I'm in heaven
The taste of your lips sends shivers down my spine
I can see the love in your eyes and I know everything will be fine.
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