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This is a story about Rae who finds love in her brother's band, Black Veil Brides.
Raelynn Ferguson, main point of view. She is eighteen years old and is the sister of Jinxx in Black Veil Brides. Shocking thing about her: She doesn't like music.1

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Chapter One:

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I was talking to Jinxx, my brother, on video chat. My brother, Jinxx, was part of some band called Black Veil Brides. I knew they were famous and all, but I really just didn't care for famous people. I mean, they're just normal people who are really well-known and adored by people who are 'quiet'. It's just like high school. Famous people are popular where as the non-famous people are the quiet people.5

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I don't see why people have to treat them like they're a god and worship famous people. I mean, seriously? It's sad in my point of view.7

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"Yeah, but I can't wait to see you!" Jinxx was saying.9

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"I know, same here," I said, smiling.11

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"You are going to have so much fun with Sandra, Jake, Ashly and Andy," he said, smiling like a monkey.13

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"How would you know? I haven't even met them yet," I raised an eyebrow.15

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"I know, but it's just a feeling, Raelynn," he said.17

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A voice I didn't recognize said, "Hey, who are you talking to, Jinxx."19





"My sis," he said turning to where the voice came from.





"Oh," said the voice again. "So, where's my hair straightener?"





I giggled. Guys don't straighten their hair.





"They do too," said the same voice.





"What?" I asked in confusion.



"You said guys don't straighten their hair," laughed the voice.





Oh, God. Had I really said that outloud? Geez, that's embarrassing!





"Oh, well, it's true. Guys aren't supposed to straighten their hair," I pointed out.





Jinxx and the guy said, "They can too!"





"Can not!" I argued.





"They so can," Jinxx crossed his arms as a guy appeared on my screen. He had shaggy-and I mean, really shaggy-hair that was black. His skin was fair, yet pale and not sickly pale. He wore a plain black shirt with white skinny jeans.





"It's not natural for a guy to straighten their hair," I wailed out.





"Eh," Jinxx thought for a minute, "You're right on that on."





"What?" the guy said in disbelief at Jinxx.



"What?" Jinxx raised his shoulders, "She does have a point, Andy."





So that's Andy, huh? I thought. Fits him well.





"Yeah, yeah, so where's my straightener, dude?" Andy waved off the subject.



"In the bathroom where it always is," Jinxx said pointing to a wall.





"Kay," I heard Andy say, his voice fading as he left the room.





I laughed, "So guess what?"





"Chicken butt?" Jinxx guessed.



"No, but better. My boss from my work heard that I was leaving the job and you know, Bob. He likes me. So, he gave me, like two thousand dollars and when I asked what it was for, he said, to start off on making a living. I was so shocked," I said, my hands moving animately.63





"But you won't need it since you're living with me and my roomates," Jinxx smiled.65





"Yeah, so that's why I went shopping!" I squealed excitedly. "Shopping spree!"67





"Don't you have enough clothes, Rae?" he asked, laughing at my excitement.69





"Yeah, but I love clothes!" I said, still excited.



"I know you do," he rolled his eyes. He suddenly noticed my favorite book of all time on my bed, "Is that Ink Heart





Chapter Two

I looked at the black, long haired man. He was tall for his age. He had brown eyes and he wore a plain black tee and black pants. He didn't wear any type of fancy shoes.



My face broke out into a smile. "JINXX!"



"Rae!" He shouted, running towards me.



I tackled him with the biggest hug I ever gave anyone. I hugged him tightly, letting the warmth surround our bodies. I took in a big wiff of Jinxx's cologne, and nearly gagged. Jinxx pulled away with a confused expression. "What's with the face?"



"Ick, Jinxx, you have really gross taste in perfume," my face distorted with disgustion.



Jinxx just laughed at me and dragged me and my bags to a group of other people that looked like Jinxx. Well, his type, not him literally.



"Guys, this is Raelynn, my seeester. Rae, this is Sandra, Jake, Ashly and Andy," Jinxx introduced me to his band.



I recognized the guy from the cam, Andy. I narrowed my eyes at him and his straightened hair.



"Jinxx, your sister's alot more prettier in person than web cam," Andy commented, smiling at me.



Jinxx and I, at the same time, hit Andy upside the head and told him, "Shut up, Andy!"



Jinxx and I looked at eachother with a straight face and broke out into laughter.



We all exchanged a bit more chatter and talking or whatever, and headed out into their van.1

Jake drove us to the house. The house shouldn't really be called a house, since it was a miniture mansion. The main color of the house was a light yellow. The yard was filled with... emptiness. It only had green grass. Nothing of decoration. I sighed. What a boring yard, but they say, what's on the outside isn't always on the inside. Let's just hope that stays true for this little mansion.2

I walked inside, the others trailing behind me. I gasped. The inside was the exact opposite of the outside.3

I breathed slowly. I loved every room that I was shown. They were all so... soo.... designer like! It was amazing to see the rich side of life now...29

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Life right now, couldn't get any better then it already is. Well... for now, at least. There are much more things to come that will make me even happier than I am right now.31

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And I couldn't wait to know what those things were.



Chapter Three

I was soundlessly sleeping. When I was sleeping, I had always had a part of me knowing what was going on. It was weird, but I just went with it. It kept me from being pranked from Jinxx. I felt someone hover over me. My eyes shot open and I jolted forward only to hit my head on my brother’s forehead.1



“Ow!” screamed Jinxx.2



“Big headed freak!” I screamed at Jinxx.3



“You’re the one with the big head, big head!” he shot back at me.4



Jake, Ashly and Andy came running in the room with wondering expressions. Jinxx and I were glaring at each other with daggers.5



“Dude, what the hell is going on?” asked Ashly.6



“Yeah, what’s goin’ on?” asked Andy, curious.7



“He,” I pointed to my brother, “hovered over me in my sleep and we bonked heads! He has a big ass head!”8



“No!” Jinxx said, “You hit your head against mine and you woke up with that fucking sixth sense you fucking have, you freak!”9



“I’m not a freak!” I yelled, ready to tackle him.10



I was just about to tackle him when I felt two arms wrap around my chest, pulling me away from Jinxx. The warm arms held me away from him so I couldn’t tackle him. I fought with a lot of strength. 11



“Let me go!” I shouted, kicking my legs around.12



“No,” said Andy, “No fighting.”13



I glared at Jinxx, “Fine. Let me go.”14



Andy let me go. I grabbed my notebook, a few pencils and my paint. I ran out of the mansion and into the lush green grass. I picked a spot where it didn’t look itchy. I laid down on my stomach and began drawing with my eyes closed.15



The result of that was… pretty good. I mean, despite all the random lines and swirls, it looked good.16



I took out my acrylic paint and started painting random colors, shapes and lines. I did this kind of painting all the time. This type of painting made me happy, it made me feel free. And I loved it. 17



I heard footsteps coming and I sighed.18



“I’m sorry about earlier, Rae,” I heard Jinxx’s voice.19



“I accept, Jinxxie,” I smiled at his nickname.20



Jinxx laughed, “What the hell are you doing?”21



“Painting,” I said shrugging my shoulders, “why?”22



“It doesn’t look like painting…” he said making a weird face.23



I looked at Jinxx. With my paint brush, I wiped some red paint on him and giggled. He looked silly.24



“Jinxx!” I giggled, “can I paint your face?”25



“Sure, why not?” he sighed.26



Grabbing my acrylic paint, I sat in front of Jinxx , the criss cross apple sauce way(author’s note: hehe, sorry. “criss cross apple sauce” is known as ‘indian sitting’ or just crossing your legs if you didn’t know. =] )27



I painted a bright, yellow banana on his cheek, blue dots on his forehead and with the white paint, I made him look like he was an Indian, ready to go into war with the English men. I giggled at Jinxx. 28



Andy came out side, “Hey, Jinxx, where is-” he cut himself off as he looked at Jinxx and I. He burst with laughter and I followed Andy’s actions, laughing along with him.29



“Dudes, what are you laughing at?” Jinxx looked at us quizzically.30



Clenching our stomachs because we were laughing so hard, we led Jinxx up to the bathroom so he could get a look at himself. He looked at himself in the mirror and smiled. 31



“Dude, I look awesome!” he exclaimed.32



I chuckled.33



Jinxx pulled out his camera, pulled me next to him, and took a picture. He looked at it, “This bitch is going on MySpace.”34



I shook my head.35



I realized I was still in my black booty shorts and white tank top. I ran to my room to find something presentable to wear instead of what I was wearing right now. I threw a few clothes around the room, making a bit of a mess and found what I was looking for. A black, purple, and pink shirt with a panda who had an eye patch on, black skinny jeans with zippers, colorful worded converse shoes, a Black Veil Brides bracelet, an Epic bracelet, and a dove necklace I had gotten for my sweet sixteen.36



I stepped out of my room and ran downstairs, nearly falling towards the end. I skidded to a stop in the kitchen. My light pink hair was in my face so I took out a barrette and pinned it back. 37



“What’s up, homies?” I said, feeling a little like a ganster.38



“Not much, Rae,” Ashly chuckled at my mood. “Want some breakfast?”39



I nodded quickly and sat down at the table while Ashly fixed me breakfast.40



Andy came down, dressed in black fuzzy pants and a white shirt. He looked at Ashly and then at me. Ashly, me. Ashly, me.41



“What the hell? Why is Ashly fixing you breakfast? You could at least help him,” Andy gave me a look.42



I looked at him straight in the face, “Well, I’d love to, but he’s my bitch boy.”43



Ashly choked, bursting with laughter.44



Andy looked at me and said, “You’re strange.”45



“I’M MARRIED TO COOKIE MONSTER!” I screamed to the house.46



Andy and Ashly looked at me, eyebrows raised. In unison, which was a little weird, they asked me, “Are you on drugs?”47



“Hells yea bitches,” I giggled and shook my head, “No, I’m not. I hate drugs… They make you stupid, like… retarded, stupid.”48



Suddenly, my phone rang. I looked at the number and it was an unknown number. I answered it.49



“Hello?”50



“Hi, baby,” said a familiar voice.51



All happiness was wiped from me and a painful expression replaced my face. “What is it?”52



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Nothing, love, can’t I talk to my baby?”54



“No,” I said, “I’m not your baby, remember? You dumped me, ass hole.”55



My ex-boyfriend chuckled, “Oh, darling. Didn’t you remember our break up sex?”56



“SHUT THE FUCK UP, YOU DOUCHEBAG!” I screamed into the phone and whipped it across the room.57



I rested my face in my hands and took in slow, deep breaths. I couldn’t believe he had the nerve to talk to me. My EX thinks we’re together when the careless bitch dumped me heartlessly on the internet for the world to see. I hate him!58



I felt a hand on my shoulder and I let my head fall against the table. Only thing was, that I didn’t feel the table on my head. I felt, hot, mushy food. I raised my head a little to stare at a plate full of food.59



“FUCK MY LIFE!” I screamed.60



Seriously, though… Fuck. My. Life. It needs some excitement, doesn’t it? 61



(Author’s note: Never thought of “Fuck My Life” into depth until now XD and think about ‘motherfucker’ into depth… that’s just gross Dx. Okay! Back to the story now!)62



I hated my life… I really did. Well, only when I fail at days like these…



Chapter Four

I sighed, looking at my phone. Earlier when my ex-boyfriend called me, I was so mad and frustrated at him, I threw my phone across the room. Well, I thought, that wasn’t a smart idea. I was looking at my phone, which was smashed into smithereens. 1



Andy came up behind me, “Damn, Rae, that’s one dead phone.”2



I nodded, sympathetic. “Let’s give Phony a funeral.”3



“You named your phone?” Andy raised his eyebrows at me.4



I nodded sadly. “It is-was my baby.”5



Andy shook his head, “Me and you, alright?”6



I nodded happily. The less the people the better it was. Phony didn’t like a lot of people. And I had a feeling he’d like Andy easily. 7



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he funeral we gave Phony was simple. We buried him, said a few good words and said a prayer for him. I kissed the ground and waved goodbye to Phony.9



“Phony’s in a good place now, Rae,” Andy said trying to comfort me.10



“I know, but I miss him so much! He was the best phone I’ve ever had,” I frowned.11



“Well, what do you say me, you and the boys go out for the day and eat at restaurants and you can buy a new phone?”12



I nodded.13



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Andy, Jake, Ashly, Jinxx and I all went to the mall. I ran around the mall countless times with the guys following me and trying to catch me. We went to Best Buy to go get a new phone for me. After an hour of looking around, I decided on the iPhone. I wanted a really nice phone now. 15



We were at the food court, getting something to eat. We were spread around the place, each of us sitting on in a different table so the guys didn’t attract attention. Well, it worked. 16



They didn’t.17



Andy and I were sitting at a table, goofing off.18



I threw a fry in his mouth. He clapped, “Oh yea! Who’s da master?”19



“Not you,” I snorted. 20



“Are you sure?” he asked me, an evil smile on his face.21



“I’m sure… I’m sure that I’M THE MASTER, BITCH!” I laughed in his face.22



When I was laughing, Andy took that chance shoved a handful of fries of his into my mouth. 23



It was his turn to laugh in my face. I frowned, slowly eating the fries. I swallowed them down and said, “Andy Sixx, you my good friend, is a butt face.”24



“Butt face?” Andy laughed at my insult, “Is that the best you can come up with?”25



“Lint licker.”26



“Butt licker.”27



“Bitch boy.”28



“Dick sucker.”29



“Woman lover.”30



“Man lover.”31



“Fat ass.”32



“Big ass lama.”33



“Frootloop head.”34



“Popsicle.”35



“Panda.”36



“Computer.”37



“Banana.”38



“Kitty.”39



“Fucknuts.”40



“Avatar.”41



“Fudge,” I said, “I give up.”42



Andy laughed in my face. “Good; I win.”43



I considered calling him a butt face, but I decided against it. 44



I took a huge bite of my hamburger. I swallowed it down and chugged down half of my pop. A burp escaped my lips. Andy stared at me for a single moment before laughing out loud. I laughed with him.45



I felt two hands jab into my sides. I squealed like a baby pig. 46



I turned around to face Jake. 47



“Butt head,” I stuck my tongue out at him.48



“Careful,” Jake said, smiling, “A seagull might poop on that tongue.”49



“Not before a man-eating seagull eats you first, butt head,” I retorted.50



“Harsh,” he snorted. 51



I laughed, “Don’t care.”52



For the second time today, I felt two hands stab into my back. And again, like the first time, I squealed like a baby pig. I turned around, glaring at a laughing Ashly and Jinxx.53



“You ain’t my bitch boy anymore,” I said, sticking my nose in the air.54



They laughed at me. 55



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I sighed tiredly as we walked our way to the door. I was so tired! We had walked our way there and we walked around the mall for a good four to five hours. We had to walk back. But I distracted myself with trying to figure out the iPhone. So far, it was pretty easy. :3 I am so smart! Hehe… Okay I’m weird.57



We reached home and I threw off my converse shoes and sighed as I fell against the orange couch. “Sitting down never felt so good,” I sighed happily.58



“You’re just lazy,” Andy teased me.59



“Fuck no I ain’t lazy. I did not just walk around a mall for five hours with you guys!” I defended myself.60



They shook their heads. 61



I took out my new phone and played around on it for a bit. I updated my status on facebook as, ‘Playin with my new iPhone. I gave Phony a funeral with Andyy Sixx. J’62



I updated my MySpace status to the same thing. 63



Then, I decided to hop into a shower and get ready for bed.64



After I brushed my teeth and such and I went to go try and find Jinxx’s room. After walking in two of the boys, I found his room.65



“Jinxxie, can I stay in your room tonight?” I asked innocently.66



“Why?” he asked me.67



“’Cause I don’t want to be alone,” I said.68



“’Kay, fine, get your butt over here,” Jinxx patted the bed. 69



I ran and jumped on the bed, landing on my back. I snuggled next to my brother, or should I say best friend since we act like best buddies? Yeah, I think so. We have an unnormal relationship, Jinxx and I.70

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