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Rated: E · Poetry · Other · #1706173
This was a school assignment to wirte a pantoum.
Fall into the cold darkness
hold my breath and try not to drown
silent noise bursts my eardrums
I am weightless.

Hold my breath and try not to drown
as black silk surrounds me
I am weightless
my burdens have been lifted.

As black silk surrounds me
I am pulled, jerked around by the flow
my burdens have been lifted
the pressure is gone.
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