poem i wrote. please review :P |
Forsaken Rejected An outcast to all who are near me But who are they to judge me Who are they to know my sins? Do they know my reasons? Do they know my sacrifice? Who are they to judge me? All the pain All the anger Unneeded Uncalled far Perhaps they are right Those who judge me by my actions Perhaps my thoughts are identical To that which has caused me shame But even if that is so Who are they to judge me? Have they who hate, who lie, who hurt, who judge Remained clean? Have they not sinned, those who think they are superior? All of the lies, the corruption The tainting of their black hearted souls Who are they to judge me? This life has brought me sorrow This life has brought me joy This life has brought me pain This life has brought me the knowledge that all who have lived, and that who shall live are imperfect For they have sinned, just as I have sinned They have felt joy, and peace, and madness just as I have So who are they to judge me? The sinners, liars, betrayers, and followers For they who are corrupt just as I am And shall be and shall always be The sins I have committed The sins I remember The sins I forget The sins I regret, and shall always for all eternity remember These are the sins committed by all So who are they to judge me |