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by analog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ · Fiction · Action/Adventure · #1613237
The battle of Light vs. Dark continues on with a new era of heroes, action and thriller.
                                  Long ago, in the forbidden realm of Obsidian there were two sides to choose.  You were either born into the shadows of "The Forsaken" or into the light of "Night Haven".  These two groups have been going to war with each other for centuries but things had slowed down for a little bit when both sides lost the Commander in battle.  Night Haven was formed by a group of refugee elves.  There homeland and family was destroyed by Centaurs and Trolls, They couldn't take it anymore and wanted to take revenge for their family.  Soon after different races joined "Night Haven" like the Humans, Dwarves and Werewolves.  "The forsaken" had been together ever since the beginning of time.  They are made up of Orcs, Trolls, Undead, and Goblins.  We start off in the morning of one of the most Cunning and fiercest warriors of "Night Haven".  His name is Veroldir, he is second in command of "Night Haven".  When Volx wakes up he sees himself sweating as if he just got out of the shower, he went to go wash up in the bathroom across the courtyard at six in the morning.  Soon after he got out of the bathroom one of the soldiers came yelling in the courtyard "HELP! HELP! WE FOUND A FORSAKEN IN THE WATCH TOWER"!  As soon as Veroldir heard he put on his shackling mail chest armor, Mail Armor Leggings, Titan Steele Helm and High Heat Metal Gauntlets that was to the side of the courtyard, he picked up "Sha'atar the sword of his fathers.  He ran into the watch tower to see the forsaken begging the soldiers to spare his life.  An Orc names O'grall was on his knees sweating in blood from head to toe.  One of the elite soldiers named Esile was one of the few who really had bitter hatred for "The Forsaken".  No Please!..PLease! don't do anything to me! I beg of you! Let me free and i will help you defeat "The Forsaken"! cried O'grall.  I have pity for these low life scums, they sneak into our fortress trying to spy on us and they just think that we are just going to let them go!? Esile angrily said.  Esile calm down we don't need you to get angry over nothing like how you usually get said one of the other elite knights.  How can you not want to kill these people after what they have done to your family!? yelled Elise. Master  Vorgin, one of the best healers of "Night Haven" came walking in the tower.  Excuse me, but what is going on in here! said Master Vorgin.  Everybody turned to the door to look at Master Vorgin.  Elise ran to Master Vorgin as if he was being chased by a group of Forsakens.  Please excuse our screaming Master but, we just found a Forsaken in our watch tower trying to steal something said Elise.  Volx walked up to Master Vorgin and told him to come with him to where they were keeping the Orc.  When Master Vorgin came walking through the door he saw O'grall in a steel chair with his hands tied behind the chair and his feet tied to the legs of the chair as well.  Well..Well..Well..What do we have here? questioned Master Vorgin.  The "Night Havens" Executor Erollix was standing right next to O'grall with a Giant two handed axe as big as a bull in one hand and a two handed sword as sharp as a new forged blade in the other.  We have a trespasser here that wont tell us anything about why he came here said Erollix.  Relics a powerful sorcerer came into the room where O'grall was held captive.  Let me See into his mind to see what was his purpose of coming here was Master Vorgin said Relics.  Master Vorgin nodded, okay Relics do what ever you can to see why he has come here.  Relics gets ready and starts to cast his spell, his hands starts to glow in this mixture of light and dark purple mist, after a couple seconds has passed he got into the mind of O'grall.  When Relics was in the mind of the forsaken he saw O'grall talking to his commander about being able to sneak in "Night Havens" Watch tower and stealing the war plans.  When Relics was done he shrugged his shoulders and stared O'grall in the eyes for a couple minutes laughing and smiling to himself.  Well O'grall wants our War plans to he can give it to his Commander Gore-monger.  Esile came into the room and just bent next to O'grall and said "You, will never make it out of here alive".  The orc laughed and spat on Esile's face.  Esile Drew out his two handed sword and swung it right next to O'gralls Neck.  You better watch watch out or i will kill you myself! I dont care if i get put into jail, as long as you are dead I am fine with it. Thats Enough! yelled Volx stepping in bewteen Esile and O'grall.  Jixler one of the sharpest and most keen archers in "Night Haven" came running in saying "Commander Valcor is coming"!  The ground was shaking drastically, it was dead quiet.  All they can here is the footsteps of the commander's coming closer and closer.  The footsteps stopped... A few seconds later the commander kicks down the down the door.  The commander was dressed in all gold armor top to bottom, He is wielding a Silver Long sword and a hefty large Dragonsteel shield with a Lion and eagle emblem forged right in the middle. Commander Valcor starts laughing.  How stupid are you for coming here!? Do you want to die!? yelled Commander Valcor. O'grall remained silent staring at the floor.  Elise i will give you an option to duel O'grall in the arena in the training ground or just stand around yelling at him.  Elise had a big grinned on his face and said "Lets duel".  After everybody left the orc in the prison chamber Volx told Esile to wait up and told him that O'grall is no easy fight.  Esile was thinking for a couple minutes and then told Volx that he will be fine and he will kill O'grall and then Elise walked out of the courtyard into the streets.  Volx wasn't to sure about it because even though Elise was one of the elite knights, he still had a lot to learn before getting into a one on one battle with a forsaken.  He was thinking back to what he had saw on the orcs neck.  It was a black and red marking of the letters "T" and "F" that stood for "The Forsaken".  The Forsaken only put markings on the warriors that have fought in one hundred or more battle and have killed fifty commanders.  Volx was curious why how the orc never fought back, and then it hit him.  He wants to kill Esile! That's why he wasn't saying anything! He was hoping to get a duel with Esile knowing that the commander always resorts in always having duels with people who are caught trespassing.  He wanted to run and tell Esile but he knew that Esile wouldn't listen to him.  Volx didnt know who to tell so he was in distress thinking about what will happen tomorrow during the duel. Volx was was having dinner with the elite twelve.  Venoxxis is a female healer and she started to notice that Volx was not himself.  She noticed that he was quieter than usual.  Volx i is there something wrong? questioned Venoxxis.  No there is nothing wrong i was just in deep thought is all smiled Volx.  I can tell there is something wrong with you though, you can tell me anything i can help you said Venoxxis.  Okay, well earlier today i saw a marking on The Forsaken, and so later that day the commander offered Esile a duel with O'grall but, the thing is that the orc is a much higher rank than we thought.  Well we just cant let sit around here then! We have to worn the commander and Esile! yelled Venoxxis.  NO! NO! you can't, they wont believe you.  They are all caught up in there little world so they wont even want to listen to what you have to say.  Esile told me that he wants to fight this orc because of what the orcs did to his family and to his homeland.  Venoxxis just stared at Volx and just said "Okay, we will just have to hope for the best for tomorrow then".  Later that night after dinner he went into his quarter and just laid down in his bed thinking about the marking on the orc.  What if Elise gets to cocky and he gets slaughtered!? talking to himself.  He turned facing the wall trying to go to sleep, but all he could think about was how high ranked O'grall was and can Esile take him one on one? A couple minutes minutes later he drifted off to sleep slowly.
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