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Rated: E · Poetry · Romance/Love · #1596742
My free verse titled Gone. Constructive Criticism please! I hope you like it!
Gone  -Chrisna Emmetsen
Even though you’re gone and I’m still here,
there is a remote place deep within my heart that still holds you close.
My devastated soul aches with longing for how we once were but no longer are.
I desperately cling to the memories that you left behind. As if they were all I have left to survive.
Anything and everything I see brings a pain to my chest. For they taunt me with remembrance of things that we once treasured.
Even though you’re gone and I’m still here.
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