Enough is Enough

This is my first draft. tell me what you think!!!(//_^)

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Enough is Enough

it was good, we were more than friends.
i hoped to god it would never end.
every time we kissed, it was pure magic,
which makes this even more hurtful than tragic.

we walked together, hand in hand,
on the beach, across the sand.
in this world, i could ask for nothing more,
than what i hoped our future had in store.

i loved you, something i thought was fake.
turns out, it was my money you wanted to take.
you used every trick in the book, nothing was too low.
you did not care if you sent me below.

i fell for you, over and over, never stopping, not thinking,
you drove me to drugs, pills, and to start drinking.
but i kept on, hoping for something to change,
but all that happened was that i became deranged.

but ENOUGH IS ENOUGH! i will not fall for you again.
i know now that you represent nothing but sin.
so i say good-bye to you, you who tore me apart.
and with that, haha, with that, we dispart...

forever...

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i realise now that this is a little emo and crap like that, but i still think it sounds good to me!!!

again, comments and criticisms are greatly appreciative, but only if they are constructive.

NOTE: Dispart=italian for separate.

*EDIT* i just realized this only took me about 15 min...that is super freakin good for me...dang...