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Rated: XGC · Short Story · LGBTQ+ · #1437033
One story from my erotic collection, "Aroused"
“Be careful what you wish for. It just might come true.”
I remember my mother telling me this over and over when I was a little kid. It was one of those things your parents tell you that you think sounds stupid as shit when you’re a snot nosed brat, but that comes back to haunt you when you move out and on your own. Had I known the truth in those words, I’d have taken my mother’s advice and been a lot more careful about what I wished for over the years. But not this time.
My twenty-fifth birthday was amazing. A group of friends threw an awesome party for me, and made me feel really special. I got lots of great gifts, but I was a little surprised when my three best friends chipped in on one gift for me. I was even more surprised when they handed me a card and nothing else.
“What’s this?” I asked as I tried to hide my disappointment. “Where’s my gift?”
“That is your gift,” Brian said, and nudged Robert and Carlos on either side of him.
I stared blankly at them.
“Trust me,” Carlos said as he leaned in and kissed me on the lips, “you’re gonna love it.”
I read the card. “Wish Upon A Star. Like every good Genie, this card entitles you to three wishes, all guaranteed to come true. Happy Wishing!” It was a simple blue card with bright gold lettering. Cute, but not really what I was expecting from my three closest friends.
“Thanks, guys,” I managed weakly as I hugged them, and then turned to replenish my martini glass. I heard them laughing, and when I turned to glare at them, they stopped giggling quickly, and looked at the floor. But I could still see a smirk on their faces. The fuckers.
I did my best to remain happy and cordial and to be the perfect guest of honor for the rest of the night. But when it was time to say goodbye, I made short work of bidding adieu to my friends, making sure they knew I was not pleased with their cheap ass gift.
After brushing my teeth, I threw the blue Make A Wish Card on my nightstand, and climbed into bed. As the darkness overtook my room, my eyes began to get heavy. Despite being upset at Brian, Carlos and Robert, they really outdid themselves with my party. It must’ve cost them a full paycheck each to throw the party. What kind of selfish bastard was I?
I wish Carlos and Brian and Robert were here right now so I could thank them, I found myself thinking as my eyelids finally gave in to the sleepy.
A couple of seconds later I felt the mattress on either side of me sink deeper into the bed. At first I thought I was imagining things, but then I felt a strong hand tweak my left nipple, and a pair of soft full lips clasp onto my own.
“What the …”
“Shhh,” I heard Carlos say as he slipped his tongue into my mouth and kissed me deeply.
It happened so quickly I didn’t know what was going on. Carlos was kissing me tenderly on the mouth, Robert’s hot mouth wrapped around my limp cock and sucked it deep into his throat and teased me into full hardness, and Brian licked and kissed on my nipples until they stiffened in his mouth.
“Wow,” Carlos said, as he broke our kiss and took a step back from the bed. “I had no idea this is what you’d wish for.”
“But I didn’t,” I managed to croak out as I took in a deep breath. Robert’s tongue tickled my cock head for a moment and then he swallowed my cock in one slow move. “I just wished you’d be here so I could …”
“This wouldn’t be happening if it isn’t really what you wished for,” Brian said, lifting himself from my nipples and kissing me on the lips. “That’s the way the gift card works. You get what you really wish for.”
I moaned into his mouth as his soft tongue and Robert’s hot mouth overtook every sensation in my body. I thrust my tongue into Brian’s mouth and lifted my hips off the bed to slide my cock deeper into Robert’s throat.
Carlos took advantage of my raised ass, and turned me onto my side slightly, so that Robert could still suck my cock but so that he could also have access to my ass. A second later I gasped and moaned even louder as I felt his hot, wet tongue lick around my ass, and then slide slowly into my hole.
Brian kissed me gently one last time, and then stood above my head. With the moonlight streaming in from the window, I could see the silhouette of his cock. It was fully hard and throbbing about seven inches in front of him. He straddled my shoulders and then lowered himself closer to my face.
I reached out and licked the head, savoring the slick salty precum that leaked from his piss slit. I wrapped my lips around his cock head and sucked on it for a minute or so, and then slowly slid my lips down the full length of his shaft.
“Fuck, dude, that’s hot,” he moaned as the fat head slipped past my tonsils and deep into my throat.
I felt Robert’s mouth slip off my cock, and was about to complain, when I felt Carlos’ hands on either side of my waist, flipping me onto all fours. The action caused me to let go of Brian’s cock, and I suddenly felt completely empty. I was confused and started to say something, when I realized what was happening.
Carlos was standing at the side of the bed, and moving me, on my hands and knees, over to the edge of the bed in front of him. Robert was already lying on his back, and sliding himself underneath me. Brian was still fully hard and still dripping precum as he placed one leg on either side of Robert’s thin body and smiled at me as he slapped his cock against my cheeks.
“Fuck me,” Robert said as he lifted his ass a couple of inches off the mattress.
My own cock throbbed in front of me. I leaned down and licked Robert’s ass. He moaned and bucked his ass harder against my mouth, and I ravaged it as if it were my last supper.
“Fuck me,” he said, louder and more persistent this time.
I grabbed my cock and guided it to his ass. I thought I’d go slow and take my time, allowing Robert some time to relax and be ready for me. But he was obviously already ready, and had other ideas. When my cock head reached his hole, I stopped and let it rest just on the entrance to his ass. But Robert took a deep breath, and slid his ass all the way down my hard cock. He didn’t stop until my balls rested against his ass cheeks.
“Fuck!” I moaned loudly.
“That’s what I’m sayin’,” Robert said with a grin as he gripped my cock with his ass muscles and then slowly slid up and down the length of my cock.
As I caught my breath, and began sliding in and out of Robert’s ass, Brian took a step closer to me and slipped his cock into my mouth. I sucked on his dick, savoring the soft silky skin against the hard muscle as it slid deep inside my throat and then almost out again. Then I felt Carlos’ tongue licking my ass cheeks again, and slide slowly in and out of my ass. My head spun with the overwhelming pleasure. I thought nothing could feel better than having Carlos’ tongue sliding in and out of my ass as I fucked Robert’s hot ass and swallowed Brian’s hard cock deep into my throat.
But I was wrong. A moment later Carlos stopped licking my ass. I made an extra effort to stick my ass further into the air as I withdrew from Robert’s ass before sliding back inside. When he didn’t return to eating my ass, I thought maybe he’d left to go to the restroom of something. But again, I was wrong.
A second later I felt the hot and hard skin of his cock head push against my ass. At first I tightened up, and tried to take in a deep breath. But since my mouth was filled with Brian’s cock, I only succeeded in choking a little. Then I relaxed, and as I did, Carlos pushed forward.
I felt my eyes bulge wide open as I stopped fucking Robert, and just allowed Brian’s hard cock to rest inside my throat. I’m certainly not a virgin to being fucked, and not even one to being fucked by big cocks. I hadn’t seen Carlos’ cock, but as it slid persistently inside my ass, I could feel that it was the biggest cock I’d ever had. He slid in slowly, allowing my muscles to get used to the thickness of his cock. With each inch, my muscles tore just a little, to allow him further access. It seemed to go on for an eternity, and when he finally stopped pushing forward, I knew I had at least ten inches of fat, hard cock deep inside me.
“You ready now?” Carlos whispered as he leaned down and kissed my ear.
My mouth was filled with Brians’ cock, and so my only possible response was to squeeze his cock with my ass muscles and slide my cock deep into Robert’s ass, and then out again, causing my own ass to impale Carlos’s huge cock.
And that was all it took, really. The four of us began fucking like a well-oiled machine. Carlos shoved his cock deep into my ass just as I slid out of Robert’s, then pulled out of my ass as I slid all the way into Robert again. Robert, for his part, couldn’t get enough, and moaned loudly as he bucked wildly up and down the length of my cock. Brian slid his cock in and out of my mouth, alternating between slow, deep thrusts and quick, frantic ones.
I’d never been so completely consumed with cock and ass, and never been so completely satisfied. There wasn’t an inch of my body that wasn’t electric with pleasure. My ass and mouth were filled with cock and stretched to their limits. My cock felt like it was wrapped with liquid fire as I slid deep into Robert’s ass. I literally saw fireworks in my head every time Carlos stabbed his cock all the way to the balls into my ass, and I wanted the feeling to never end.
“God, I wish I could feel your cock inside me forever,” I said between loud moans as Brian removed his cock from my mouth to keep from coming too soon.
“Jason, don’t say that. You gotta be careful …”
“Shut up and fuck me,” I growled as I grabbed Brian’s cock and sucked it into my mouth again.
We were out of control now. Carlos and Brian fucked my ass and mouth relentlessly, and I pounded into Robert like I was driving a stake through Dracula’s heart. I was starting to get close, and I could tell everyone else was, too. Brian’s cock was getting thicker in my mouth, and Carlos was starting to breath heavily as he slammed into me. Robert was thrashing his head back and forth on the bed, and grabbing the sheets on either side of him.
“Not like this,” I said as I pulled my mouth from Brian’s cock. “Let me lie on the bed. I want you all to shoot all over me.”
Robert pulled himself from my cock and slid from under me quickly, and moved around to the side of the bed. Carlos flipped me around onto my back, never allowing even an inch of his cock to leave my ass, and laid me on my back on the bed. Robert was now at my left side, and Brian straddled my face with a knee on either side of me. His ass was right at my face, with his cock pointing toward my feet. I couldn’t see anything in front of me but his ass, and so I reached out with my tongue and licked at it hungrily.
Everyone was moaning loudly now. My own orgasm was quickly working its way up my shaft, and I could tell by the way Brian’s ass was flexing, that he was about to shoot as well. I could still feel Carlo’s cock deep inside me, fucking me harder and faster. Robert was to my left. I wanted their loads all over me, and didn’t hesitate to let them know.
“Come on guys, I want you to shoot all over my face. Brian, turn around. Carlos, pull out of my ass and come over to my right.”
“What are you talking about, dude?” I heard Carlos say from directly next to me on the right. “I’m right here.” He took a step to his left, and suddenly his long, fat uncut cock was an inch from my face.
But that can’t be, I thought as Brian turned around and pointed his cock at my face as well. I can still feel Carlos’ huge cock sliding in and out of my ass. It drove in an extra long and hard stab just to let me know I was not imagining things. And yet, I was staring at its angry red head an inch from my mouth.
“Fuck, man,” Carlos yelled, “that’s it. I’m gonna shoot!”
A second later my face was showered with hot cum. It sprayed all over me from every direction, and seemed to go on forever. I felt my own load blast from my cock, and from the sound of Brian’s moans, it was landing all over his back. A minute later, my face was covered with jizz, and it dripped down my cheeks and neck as my three best friends tugged at their cocks to allow every last drop to land on my face.
I was still moaning and writhing my ass under Brian’s body and against the bed.
“Dude, you already came, and we’re all done, too,” Brian said. “You can relax now.”
“You’re not gonna believe this,” I said, as I felt my eyes roll in the back of my head, and bit my lower lip lightly. My cock was still rock hard, and throbbed against my stomach.
“What?” Carlos said.
“You’re still fucking me.”
“What?” he asked as he looked at me as if I were crazy. “Dude, you’re high.”
“No, I’m not. I still feel your cock inside me, and you’re still fucking me.”
My buddies looked back and forth from one another, stunned.
“Oh, SHIT!” Robert yelled. “Remember earlier, Jason said he wished he could feel your cock inside him forever. That was his second birthday wish.”
Carlos, Brian and Robert started laughing as they watched me slide my ass back and forth against the invisible cock fucking my ass. I was vaguely aware of them around me as delirium took over my body, and I closed my eyes. A moment later my second load of the night flew from my cock, and landed all across my chest and stomach.
And then I fell asleep.

The next morning I was awakened by the phone.
“Listen, Jason, I know you’re not thrilled with our gift. I know it doesn’t seem like much right now.” It was Carlos. “But trust me, you’re gonna love it. I promise.”
I could still feel his fat cock deep inside my ass. It wasn’t fucking me now, but just buried there, filling me up completely. The previous night came flooding back to me, and I remembered my first two wishes. I couldn’t believe it was happening, but there was no denying the long, thick, hard cock I felt up my ass. I hadn’t used my third wish, and for a moment, I thought about wishing I’d never asked to feel Carlos’ cock inside me forever. I was soft, but just the sound of Carlos’ voice was getting me plump, and as I got harder, the feel of his cock inside me began to move ever so slowly. I suddenly realized the little bit of control I had over the situation, and decided not to use my last wish just quite yet. I’d save it for another time.
“Jason, are you there?”
“Yes,” I said softly, as my cock grew just a little harder, and I felt his thick cock begin to slide in and out of my ass slowly. I closed my eyes and moaned slowly as I wriggled my ass against the pleasure it brought. “Hey, where did you guys go after the party last night?”
“We all went home. It was after three in the morning. Where else would we go? Are you okay?”
By now I was fully hard, and Carlos cock was sliding in and out at a quickening pace.
“Mmm hmm.”
“Alright. Just one last thing, though, okay. Your gift is not a joke. You get three wishes, and they really will come true.”
“Really?” I asked as I stroked my cock and felt him begin to fuck me harder and faster. I was already close.
“Okay, I can tell you’re mocking me. So I’m gonna go. Have fun with your gift. But Jason, promise me one thing.”
“What’s that?” I whispered as I bit my lip and the first spray of cum spewed from my cock and landed on my face.
“Be careful what you wish for.”
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