A rough poem, made to introduce myself to the format of accentual-syllabic verse. |
A: Stressed-unstressed E: Stressed-stressed B: Stressed-unstressed-unstressed F: Stressed-unstressed-unstressed C: Unstressed-stressed G: Unstressed-unstressed D: Unstressed-unstressed-stressed G: Dimeter; A, C, E: Tetrameter ; B, C, F: Hexameter Note: This is my very first experience with accentual-syllabic poetry, the type I poetry I really want to get into. If you see anything wrong, please tell me, as I appreciate commentary. Just keep in mind that I am not focusing on the actual poem just yet- I am simply trying to get down the form. I was also unsure if the anapests (B: Unstressed-unstressed-stressed) and the dactyls (B: Stressed-unstressed-unstressed) had to have feet of one word only. The iambs, trochees, spondees and pyrrhics were a bit easier to deal with though. This poem is comprised of tercets, and an ending couplet. Are tercets a standard type of stanza? So far, I only know of couplets, quatrains, sextets and octets. The poem's story is a bit disjointed, but as I said, that's not my focus now. I think it was a good start, because my goal is to eventually write a Terza Rima in English. Tercet 1: a) Until dawnbreaks anew, b) The masses cannot see a) The true problem arise. Tercet 2: b) They aren’t awaken'd c) to the daily b) Hustle and bustle or Tercet 3: c) the bestiality d) of the day (of the light) c) of the morrow. Tercet 4: d) Surety unassured; e) Safety forgot; d) the devil a’chasing Tercet 5: e) afore the path f) to the gates of escape e) from her domain. Tercet 6: f) And if it happens to g) be then f) that one cannot escape, Ending Coulplet: g) god help g) their soul. |