a night in Horrorville

CHAPTER 1

"AAAHH!" Jen screamed as she dropped about 50 feet. She headed up again and girls shrieked when they went down again. They went upside-down next, Jen gripped the restraints and her knuckles turned white. Her black hair was flying all over the place. She closed her eyes they plunged into darkness, and suddenly it all stopped.
"Thank you for riding the Devil, please take the exit to your left." said the announcer-like voice over the speakers.
Where am I? Jen wondered, and then she realized where she was.
Horrorville. The Devil.

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